Topic: <Blue and Crimson Tears - Froggie's Poetry> <Last updated: September 3rd>

[Froggie chan]

Alcoholic Torture

Alcoholic poisons,
Licking his cracked, drying lips,
Eyes bloodshot,
Drowned in self pity,
Passers by tut,
At the half empty bottle in hand,
Reaching out for love,
Letting it run through bloodied fingers,
Tears fall through the bottles rim,
Neutralising the liquor with raw emotion,
Pure heartbroken loneliness,
Hidden in his drunken state,
His ragged, torn clothes a reflection,
Of his broken, abused heart,
Lying in a gutter staring up,
At the starlit sky,
The now empty bottle by his side,
Each star a forgotten hope engulfed by his self-torture. 

I do realise i havent wrote anything in over a month but heres the latest works ^_^
Its an idea that ive been trying to get into words for a while now and heres my outcome.

[Froggie chan]

Young lonely girl,
Wanders through dark empty streets,
Eerie shadows creep,
Catch her with invisible hands,
Hooded figure follows,
Watching her from afar,
Catches up quickly,
Grabs her from behind.

Girl struggling against masculine grip,
Conflicting stench of sweat and alcohol
Linger on his skin,
He tears away material,
Revealing her naked flesh,
Untouched by any other human,
Displayed like a whore.

Forcing himself into her,
Against a woman’s will,
Treat her like a toy,
A cheap fix, Remember
all men are above,
History records state that,
Women just his minions,
Open to unwanted hate.

He leaves her lying helpless,
No care and no regret,
But not without threatening her into silence,
Blade held tight against her neck.

Young lonely girl,
Lost in herself torture,
Her head a shrine to repressed memories,
Her heart willing to forget,
Her confidence a shattered mirror,
Her trust in men long gone,
An empty shell of a human,
Who longs for her delayed death.

~
This is a result of too much empathy about something and some other stuff. As Liz and H both suggested it I took out the chorus to use elsewhere. If anyone wishes to know what the chorus was (why you would.. i have no idea O_o) then just PM me. ^_^

[Maki-chan]

I get lots of feelings of lonliness, helplessness, worthlessness, but also hate and violence from this one ... how about "Stained Flower" ?

[Froggie chan]

ooooo the best suggestion ive had so far me thinks ^_^

I am proud of this one but it needs some time for editing.. i might ask my english teacher for some help there..


I now name it stained flower! thankies mj-chan *huggles* ^_^

[Maki-chan]

Wheeeeeee!! ^__^ *Dances with Amy-chan*

Mee happies that you likes it Amy-chan. ^_^ *gives shiniess*

[Froggie chan]

*dances* ^__^

I like it cos it fits in a number of senses.

[Meilinrose]

I spoke to you about the poem on MSN already ^_^ I'll just say - great title! You're right, it fits in a lot of ways...

[Maki-chan]

Yaayy!! Caz-chan likes it too! ^__^

*Dances around with Caz-chan and gives out more shinies.* ^__^

[Froggie chan]

Empty Shell.

An empty shell of a whore,
A hidden smile,
One broken law,
A shattered mirror,
A collapsed trust,
But a tear can’t mend,
Your broken heart,
Wishing from a wishing well,
Guilt overtaking sense and hurt,
Feeling so small so insignificant,
No one can feel this pain,
No one sees what’s deep inside,
No one sees the truth,
Everyone can empathise with you,
But only dribbles and drabbles come my way,
This is the end my forever friend,
This is my final plea,
This whore feels no emotion,
This whore lies dead forever more…

Not much to say about this. There not much to say anymore...

[..:: Chibi Plum ::..]

Coolies. Kill rapist bastard!!!! *gets out knife*

[Froggie chan]

aww thankies hun *huggles*

You've read the new one ive posted.. meh..

[Froggie chan]

My Betrayed Friend.

Welcome to the end,
My betrayed friend,
Welcome to your satisfaction,
My betrayed friend,
Hear my last cry,
My betrayed friend,
Feel my last breath,
My betrayed friend,
Watch my life slip away,
My betrayed friend,
Dont say goodbye,
My betrayed friend,
In hell I will reside,
My betrayed friend,
But in your hurt eyes,
Thats when I truly died.


Again this is raw emotion from my heart

[..:: Chibi Plum ::..]

i figured. errrmmm advice Amy-chan. me thinks it is time u stop dwelling on what u did. its done now and everything is over and u lost a lot. stop crying and saying its ur fault coz people get tired of it..........try to smile coz mopeing won't make it any better than it already is. smile okay.

nice poem though.

[Froggie chan]

Ill never stop blaming myself for this.. i just cant do that.
But smiling.. well a little optimism here and there really does go a long way.
Im finally looking forward and trying to see the light at the end of this ^_^

and i remind you.. i did write this monday then typeds it up the tuesday.. so it was still immensly raw emotion then.

but thanks alex-chan *huggles*

[Maki-chan]

In not sure if this is exactly correct, but what I see here is similar to the feelings that I saw Hikaru having in the beginning of the second season of Rayearth. Even though she started out with the best of intentions, Hikaru wound up doing something horrible and hated herself for it afterwards. Hikaru eventually had the opportunity to make up for what she did and things were okay in the end. Even thought it might seem corny, I think that you'll have a chance to make up for what happened too Amy-chan. So try not to dwell on it because that will only feed your anxieties. Instead, try to look for an opportunity to set things right again. *Huggles* ^_^