Topic: <Blue and Crimson Tears - Froggie's Poetry> <Last updated: September 3rd>

[Froggie chan]

thanks.. i think...

Just so you know in the title the 'love' part should be crossed out and replaced with suicide - if that makes sense...

[..:: Chibi Plum ::..]

okies.

[Froggie chan]

You were bright, a shining star,
Left me hiding in the dark,
You were fire, a burning flame,
Drawn to your light like a moth I came,
You kept me warm, kept me safe,
Until I broke from your embrace,
Saw you for what you really were,
Healed all my mistakes, found the cure,
Felt the pain come flooding back,
Put my life back on track,
Ran away from your hypnotic light,
Watched as you threw your life away,
Ignoring all the shame,
Alcohol, sex, drugs your lifelines,
Trapped in your own hate and loneliness,
Watch as your light finally
Goes
Out…

[Maki-chan]

Hmm, very tragic this one is, but different from a lot of the previous ones. This time the tragedy centers around another person, someone close to the author and who means a lot to them. In many ways it's harder to watch someone you love suffer than to endure the suffering yourself.

[Froggie chan]

Espically someone you could trust..
thanks Mj.. i kind of went for a different approach with this poem thisis amianly shown by the increased rhyming.

[Meilinrose]

I don't think I've seen much of your rhyming stuff before, but I'm a sucker for "old-school" style poetry and I thought this was beautiful. Very tragic, like Mj said almost more so than your other poems because it's from another person's viewpoint, but still very good. Maybe one of my favourites of everything you've written.

[Froggie chan]

wow thanks caz ^_^ *hugs*

Im not good qwith rhymes but i wanted to rhyme this one for some reason.. i guess i wanted a change ^_^;; but thanks!

[Jamesworth]

yup yup it's so coolies, amy-chan *huggles* i was wondering.... is it about someone you know? or perhaps yourself from a different perspective? or just soemthing you made up? sorry... me got a little confused with the other posts... me too tired

[Froggie chan]

It *is* about someone i once knew. I dont know them anymore we went to different high schools.

[Jamesworth]

ah okies... so thepeom is how you *knew* them not *know* them?

[Froggie chan]

I guess... I know stuf about them now hence near the end of the poem.
She used me as a friend to do all her 'dirty work' and when i found out it was up to me alone to sort my life out again and to try and not let it happen again.
The drawn towards asspect of the poem is because she was popular. One of the most popular people in our school and i became friends with her.

[Froggie chan]

Bloodsplattered rainbow

Cant you see the tears in my hair?
The bruises on my thighs?
The cuts in my wrists?
The rips in my hips?
The cracks on my lips?
The tears in my eyes?
The fractures in my back?
The slashes on my waist?
The blisters on my feet?
The rope around my neck?
The pain in my cries?
The guilt that resides inside?
And my hope that has died…?

[Meilinrose]

Very vivid, and I like the few rhymes that you included ^_^ (Old-school poetry lovers UNITE!) Dresden Dolls influenced?

[Froggie chan]

Very much so. i started writing this one earlier in the week when i was on a dresden dool high. I love the lyrics to girl anachronism so much that i wanted to write a smilar poem the the begging lines.
This is the result. I dont think i copied any of the lyrics themselves if so not delebratly i used ey words and changed them.

the title itself is from someones username on gaia. It was 'bleeding rainbow' which i then changed into 'bloodsplattered rainbows'.

[Froggie chan]

I am not on drugs this is just a nonscence poem i think 0_o

Twisted fairytales, falling down stairs,
Eyes rolling back, the fatal crack,
Insane laughter, my childhood taunter,
Falling down the rabbit hole, whisper goodbye to abused souls,
Drunken hallucination, multicoloured ravens,
The vipers tongue, demons lunge,
Cast the evil witches spell, unadulterated hell,
Confused screams, broken up moonbeams,
Hypnotic spirals, hidden light from the candle,
Alice is waiting, cant you hear her?
Snap out of this crazed trip, Get a tight hold get a grip,
Fall back into realitys arms, But its your embrace that I long,
Welcome to my daily fix filled with twisted fairytales.