Topic: <Blue and Crimson Tears - Froggie's Poetry> <Last updated: September 3rd>

[Froggie chan]

er... o.o i wrote anoterh version of this a while ago then changed it to fit my drama...
my teacher thought it was too depressing though.. even though the girl had committed suicide!! >.<

[Maki-chan]

Hmm, it didn't seem quite that depressing to me, but there is a lot of sadness in it. I guess that it does remind me of that John Lennon song. None of us can ever live in an ideal world which is unfortunate, but as long as we keep a vision of it in sight, there will always be new ideas for us to make the world better.

[Froggie chan]

I sit in a darkened shadowed room
My eyes filling yet again
Tears of lost hope fall to the ground
My cheeks burning from salt
I try to stop the tears falling
But they carry on each time I come close
More fall against my will.

A blade the salvation of life,
The essence of love
The release of sorrow,
From my bleeding veins
Scarlet liquid falls
Forming red tears that drip
From my hand to the shadows
I wait
For the shadows to devour me completely.

[Maki-chan]

This one is also very visual Amy-chan, but I really like how you drew parallels between the blood and the tears. ^__^

[Froggie chan]

thanks Mj chan


reflected what i was like and what i wanted to do yestersday if that makes sense o.o

[Maki-chan]

Erm, actually it makes perfect sense Amy-chan. *Huggles* It's the reason why your poems are so good, the feelings that you put into them are real. ^_^

[Froggie chan]

most of them are a few arent... but thats very few

[Froggie chan]

Light flashes,
Colours hypnotise,
Head thumps,
Voices scream,
Blade cuts,
Blood pours,
Tears fall,
Muscles ache,
Heart breaks. 


Need help with a name… yet again ^_^;;

[Haggis-chan]

Got a weird sense of Deja vu when reading that you know, have I read it before? o_o

[Froggie chan]

yes you have XD

i read it to you outside your english classroom while we were waiting for H-chan XD

[Maki-chan]

It's like word association with shock value Amy-chan. ^_^;;

[Froggie chan]

i was playing word assisiation with the person i sit next to in english before i wrote it (they expect us to look for more quotations? o.o)

then it kinda came to me as usual XD

i like it though im not sure why.. might be cos i used a different layout or something *shrugs*

[..:: Chibi Plum ::..]

go proffesional!! Give the other poets areses with your true feelings.

[Froggie chan]

i am not going proffessinal!

im not that good o.o

[Maki-chan]

Erm, you do have the talent to be a professional Amy-chan! ^__^ However, you'll need to keep writing and develop your skill to make a living at writing poetry. You can do it methinks though! ^_^