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Re: id do anything
« Reply #75 on: January 05, 2005, 08:30:13 PM »
Quote from: Froggie chan on January 02, 2005, 10:29:41 PM
I can’t be free of you,
I must be free of you,

I espeically like the reverse imagery used in these two lines, I'd love to see a poem with more of this kind of thing in ^_^ Great job!
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Re: id do anything
« Reply #76 on: January 06, 2005, 06:58:45 PM »
thankies everyone
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« Reply #77 on: February 16, 2005, 07:29:19 PM »

Every day and every night,
She hears the sound of dripping blood,
Every day and every night,
She hears the sound of a heartless thud,
Every day and every night,
She hears the screams in her mind,
Every day and every night,
She hears the voice of an agonizing shout, 
Every day and every night,
She hides away from the light.
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Re: Every day and every night
« Reply #78 on: February 16, 2005, 10:03:03 PM »
Short but sweet...
Well, not sweet, exactly... o.O
But you know what I mean... >_<
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Re: Every day and every night
« Reply #79 on: February 17, 2005, 08:24:27 PM »
yep...
i got a rhythm in my head walking home one night and then the words kinda formed around it ^_^;;
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« Reply #80 on: February 18, 2005, 11:15:19 AM »
Time.

The promise of tomorrow
Clouded by a smile of yesterday
The innocence of her past
Surrounded by the guilt of today
Her future full of mystery
Her past a simple lie
Her messed up mind
Messes up the dimensions of time.
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Re: Time
« Reply #81 on: February 20, 2005, 01:34:18 AM »
That's quite different from your earlier ones Amy-chan. It seems highly metaphysical while the other poems you've written in the past were vivid with cold reality. Each time I read this one, I get a different meaning from the words. ^_^
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Re: Every day and every night
« Reply #82 on: February 20, 2005, 01:36:03 AM »
They seem like song lyrics to me, so maybe there is a musical tune to go with it?
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Re: Time
« Reply #83 on: February 20, 2005, 11:55:45 AM »
thanks MJ-chan *huggles*

i wrote this one in school when i was hearing the things... which is why i dont know the true meaning behind it ^_^;; which i suppose is a good thing
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Re: Every day and every night
« Reply #84 on: February 20, 2005, 11:58:33 AM »
ive alctually recorded myself saying this poem on my old tape recorderas it has a stronger rhythm than my others... i would have done it onto the computer then uploaded it onto here but i cant because i dont have a microphone >_<
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Re: Time
« Reply #85 on: February 20, 2005, 02:52:58 PM »
Yes, that is a good thing because it leaves it to the reader to discover their own meaning in those words. ^_^
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Re: Time
« Reply #86 on: February 21, 2005, 04:48:26 PM »
im going to post up my latest creation later me thinks....
its for my drama lessons itll hopefully be up latest tommorrow
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« Reply #87 on: February 21, 2005, 06:23:14 PM »
My fantasy

I wish for a world
Where I can be free
Just spread my wings
And let go f this pain
You don’t hit me with
Unjustified hate
Or shout abuse at my face
Laugh at my mistakes

I wish for a world
Where you don’t haunt my dreams
Or taunt me when im awake
But this is a lie
Im holding onto a childhood dream
Grasping it with both hands
But this isn’t real
Who I seem is not me
This can never be a reality
This is a fantasy
My fantasy


this is my poem that is read out at the end of my drama piece ^_^
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Re: MY Fantasy
« Reply #88 on: February 22, 2005, 08:20:47 PM »
Coolies, but dperessing as always ^_^;; I kind of get "Imagine" vibes from it, did you have that song in mind when you wrote it?
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Re: MY Fantasy
« Reply #89 on: February 22, 2005, 09:59:09 PM »
God, I hate that song...
But I do get a similar vibe from it...
I like the rhythm of it too, kinda bouncy/angry.. o.O
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