Topic: the amateur poet takes to the stage...

[Froggie chan]

thats so cute and sweet and i wanna give that shard of heart a hug!
instead ill hug you =P
*huggles H*

[minimoon]

thanks amy-chan
*hugs*

Your the one who taught me to keep that shard of hope alive.
Thank you.

[Froggie chan]

Never let that hope burn out! ^_^
*huggles*
and anytime.. and remember you saved me once too.

[minimoon]

awwwwwwwwwwwww su!
*huggles*
Me knows, me knows su!

Here be new poems from h-chan su!

Lost emotions

I break the skin
Thinking of times gone by
The emotions I want to lose
Will lose

The mirror breaks
Shattered into peices
Matching my fragile my heart
My heart of stone

No one can penetrate the barrier
of hatred and sorrow
It protects me
Keeps me safe

As the last dropfalls
My heart heals
I chant
I will never love again
I will never love again...


Cheap perfume

She lay in a dark room
Fyull of fake passion
The smell of liquor
Sweat
and cheap perfume

She lay on the bed
Striped of her dignity
Pride
and clothes

Her only thoughts were
Why and when?
Why me
and
When will it end?


Fake love

I entice them in
With my playful banter
I draw them in in
With my chort cut skirt

They follow me
My sweet scent of passion
They fall for me
My blood covered dagger


Revenge

How sweet the revenge
How sweet the blood tastes
When the men that once loathed me
Now fall for my grace

[Maki-chan]

Some interesting ideas in those H-chan. At first a lot of bitterness and sadness, which reminds me a lot of how I was at your age. But after that you have a few ideas about turning the tables and getting revenge on those that have caused misery in the past. Don't get mad, get even. ^_^

[minimoon]

heres some more.
and thanks mj!
*hug*


They say

They,
They say I'll be alright.
Them,
Them with their snug lives.
I,
I don't think that anymore.


You

Your too wrapped up in your own depression.
You don't care about other's feelings.
I don't need you anymore.
I don't want you anymore.

I hate you, I love you

I love you.
You do not see my pain.
Your ignorance clouds your eyes.
You do not see my tears.
Because I make them fall on the inside.
Your oblivious to other's pain.
Just interested in your own.
You have none.
I hate you.

[minimoon]

Imaginary friend.

Don’t worry,
She doesn’t feel pain.
She’s not there.
She doesn’t exist.
She’s my imaginary friend.

It’s ok.
She will forever smile.
She can’t cry.
She has no emotions.
She’s my imaginary friend.

Never mind.
She isn’t really hurt.
She isn’t really bleeding.
She can’t feel it anyway.
She’s my imaginary friend.

Just my imaginary friend.

[Maki-chan]

They're all really good H-chan. ^__^ *Huggles*

The first three are short, but to the point, crisp and undiluted. I think that I have an idea of where those feelings are coming from and it's very understandable and you've expressed it very well. ^_^ The imaginary friend one is also something that I can really relate to myself, although my imaginary friend that I kept inside for so many years was really myself. There, in an imaginary universe she was safe and no one could hurt her. She could have the life that she wanted but could never have in the real world.

[minimoon]

I relate the imagainary friend to myself. It's the way I feel I've been treated by some people. Im glad your able to relate to my poems mj. Although some of them I would hope it is in a good way and not the way i do.

Anyway... here are some more...

Feeble friend

Thank you to my feeble friend,
Will your generosity never end?

Sorry for the sarcastic tone,
I can't help but moan.

All I did was try to forget,
No pain, no regret.

But you brought it flooding back,
Giving me a heart attack.

Just one night free of hate,
But I guess it's just too late.

You help so many feel alright,
But when will you see the light?

You can't help me, help me how?
I've been gone a long time now.

So thank you to my feeble friend.
When will your generosity end?

Smile on my face.

Im dying with a smile on my face.
I don't want you to recognise hate.
I don't want you to see my suffering.

Im dying with a smile on my face.
I don't want you to remember hate.
I don't want you to recall my suffering.

[Maki-chan]

Hmm, they both seem to express the same kind of feeling or event. The first one shows feelings towards the source of the pain or suffering, while the second one expresses the feeling inwardly, to ourselves.

[minimoon]

Thats exactly what their about. The first one is based on two people who have hurt me, while the second one is expressing how I want to be strong even when i am suffering.

[minimoon]

Shadows

My heart is pounding
I feel warm inside
I wave, I smile
But then I realise

Looking straight through me
You smile
The one your waiting for
It is'nt me

My heart breaks
Shadows consume me

Thank you

And so my life ends
Thank you, thank you

Please no tears shed
Thank you, thank you

I feel so much better off dead
Thank you, thank you

Inner child

Why do we grow up so fast?
Mature before we're mature

Since when did sex become a fashion?
Just the word would make us blush

Why does everyone have someone?
I never used to care

Since when do we like to get drunk?
Drink used to taste disgusting

Why do we think about someone to kiss?
Kissing used to make us retch

Since when do we stay up late?
At 10.00 we'd be shattered

So, why do we have to grow up so fast?
I want to be young and innocent again.

The solution to my pain

I write my poems
Sadness, anger, depression

I draw my pictures
Sadness, anger depression

I cry my tears
Sadness, anger, depression

I cause more pain
The one solution I thourght I'd never use
pain, pain, pain

[Froggie chan]

Ack, this poems have so much raw emotion put into them they really affect me. They really touch my heart somewhere.. i only wish i could help you more than i used too. I guess i just cant.. i wish id paided more attention..
*huggles H-chan*

amazing poetry... so real and truthful and dark..

[minimoon]

This ones more of a song...

Break down

The pain,
in my heart,
Hurts too much.
I don't want to start,
Again.

I thourght I had,
A real good friend,
But now thats lost,
Again

I can'r do this anymore.
I just want to break down
And start again.

[minimoon]

Lies.

Does anyone understand?
Their sympatheitc words, full of lies.
Support that isn't there.
Care when they don't care.

Smiles and hugs all around.
Reassuring pats on the back.
Hate in their eyes.
Swarming around like flies.

The way I feel.

Surrounded by so many.
But feeling so alone.
Smiling and laughing.
But wheeping and dying.
Warm and kind.
But cold and evil.
The way I feel.
Every day.
Every hour.
Every minute.
Since you hurt me.

Shadows.

The shadows that surround me,
Are made by you.
No one sees them.
Only I can.
When the strangle me.
The grip growing tighter.
I can't cope anymore.
So let them come.
Let the shadows consume me.