Topic: the amateur poet takes to the stage...

[minimoon]

Here would be some of my poems... Please do not insult them as they reflect my feelings. And if you do I'll have to crush like the insect you are!!!!!!!!! >.<


My Haunting Love.

Love does not bring joy,
Love does not brinf happiness.
It brings sorrow,
Long days of lonliness.

My feelings haunt me,
Like spirits in my nightmares.
It is not welcome,
But it's okay, because no one cares.

How I have tried to lose this love.
But it does not go away.
It stays to torment my heart,
which was happy before that day.

I long for this love to be returned,
But it never will.
So instead it mocks me,
My feeble feelings unwanted still.

But do not pity me,
For this feeling shall be gone in the morn.
When you find my lifeless body,
Scared, .... tortured, ..... torn.

Heart broken, sadness.

I love you...
The words that hide away.
In the fragments of my broken heart.

You say you love her.
Another tear drops,
into the pool of sadness,
hidden inside me.

You hold her close.
So happy.
I force a smile,
Heart broken, sadness.

I want your happiness.
And yet I don't.
Envy takes over.
Envy that she has you.

I love you...
I long to utter these words to you.
But inside they stay locked away,
in the broken fragments of my heart.

I love you....

In my head.

You're always in my head.
I try to think of something else,
but it's no use.
Nothing can replace you.
Replace your picture,
burnt,
deep into the darkest recesses of my mind.

Never fading...
Never healing...

I feel alone without you.
For you are what I want.
Nothing else...
Just...
you.

But when Im with you,
It burns you deeper,
into my head.
The memory of your face.

Your warmth...
Your smile...

I can't take this heart break.
Stop following me,
Stop burning me.

Leavemy head...
Leave my memorie...

Leave me here...
alone and unloved....

I know, I know very depressive! ^_^;;;

[Froggie chan]

*huggles H-chan really tight but allowing her to breathe*

hun ive read some of these on the weekend and you can feel the personal asspect to them so strongly.
Its hard to get a personal response through within writing but all of these you have so well and to a really high standard!

i hope we can see some more of your poems ^_^

[minimoon]

thanks amy! ^_^;;
I just write down what I feel.
These are my thourghts on paper..... well in this case in the ether of the internet! XD

[minimoon]

fine!
dont look at my poems!
T_T

[Froggie chan]

i did!
i look at everyones i like to see everyones own styles ^_^

[minimoon]

i know!
*huggles amy*
thankies!

[Meilinrose]

I read them a while ago, I meant to reply ^_^;; Sowwies!

What I was going to say was pretty much the same as Amy - these are extremely emotional and personal poems, and I'm so glad you felt confident enough to share them *glomps* Please show more if you want to!

[minimoon]

thankies!
for that you get a glomp
*glomp*
I have another one but i cant be arsed to type it up right now!

[Froggie chan]

type it up soon H-chan
id love to see more of your work!

[minimoon]

Here be two newish ones:

Unloved again#

Again,
You've found another love.
Again,
That love isn't for me.
Again,
Im left alone.
Again,
You do not see.

Forever,
I will be left alone.
Forever,
Cold inside.
Forever,
You will be blind.
Forever,
Will my love hide.

Broken for good

I hear the news,
and my heart breaks again.
The fragments of a once happy heart,
lying at my feet.
I try to glue the tiny peices back together,
But it's no good... my heart is lost forever.

[Froggie chan]

much sadness and coolness!!!

*huggles*

[minimoon]

thanks amy-chan
*huggles*

[Maki-chan]

Mee, sorries for not posting anything before H-chan, but I do think that all of your poems are wonderful. *Huggles* I guess that I've never pictured you as a very sad or depressed person, but I see that you have a lot of lonliness inside too H-chan.  v_v

[Froggie chan]

uh-huh T_T

and remember H we are eachothers strength through thick and thin... you wrote something like that in my notebook at any rate

[minimoon]

yep amy-chan! ^_^
I am lonely but I prefer not to show it. Instead I am bubbly and hyperactive, the way I want to feel inside. ^_^;;

Heres another poem (slightly less depressive!) :

Shard of Hope

My once broken heart,
Is now hole again.
All the peices put back,
Except one.
The last shard of hope,
The one peice that just won't let go.
This peice I keep safe,
In my very soul.