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Elegy of Spiritualism. (Kuri-Chan Poems ^_^)
« on: November 17, 2004, 07:38:50 PM »
i have a POEM!! it is about the power of water (it does not have rhyme because it is a free verse)

when the world began fire raged as the heat grew.
till water ran and made the world look anew.
water rains over all thru fire, air, earth and all
calm and gentle cool and free that is what water means to me
but it can cross along with ice deadly leathal cold and not nice
now as i end this little poem i hope you care to save the oceans and all the animals!!

look i know it is shit but please just tell me okay thanx for reading
« Last Edit: March 09, 2006, 10:43:54 PM by Kuri »
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Re: MY poem I writing poetry plz read
« Reply #1 on: November 18, 2004, 06:58:57 PM »
thats cool neil
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Re: MY poem I writing poetry plz read
« Reply #2 on: November 18, 2004, 07:22:21 PM »
Thanx you! *starts to dance*
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Re: MY poem I writing poetry plz read
« Reply #3 on: November 19, 2004, 07:09:40 PM »
^__^ thats okies

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« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2004, 09:21:53 AM »
This is a Hiaku which i have thought off from yesterday

Fur of black and white
I will always remember
For you were mine then...

This Hiaku is deidcated to my cat Tibby who was put down on the 1st of December who i will always miss  :'(
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Re: My Hiaku called My missing
« Reply #5 on: December 03, 2004, 05:14:49 PM »
*huggles neil* :'(
im really sorry to hear about Tibby neil- kun v_v

and as i said thats a great way of rememberance
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Re: MY poem I writing poetry plz read
« Reply #6 on: April 08, 2005, 11:36:49 PM »
wow "it" has talent  only joking neil ur not a it ur a him
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Re: MY poem I writing poetry plz read
« Reply #7 on: April 09, 2005, 04:23:46 PM »
hes not a "him" either.... hes a neil!
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Re: MY poem I writing poetry plz read
« Reply #8 on: April 12, 2005, 07:19:09 PM »
It be much coolies Neil! I like how you included all the elements in the poem even though the main theme's water ^_^
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Re: MY poem I writing poetry plz read
« Reply #9 on: April 13, 2005, 05:19:52 PM »
Quote from: Kuri on November 17, 2004, 07:38:50 PM
(it does not have rhyme because it is a free verse)

and since when does my poems rhyme?
i really cant rhyme stuff >.<
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Re: MY poem I writing poetry plz read
« Reply #10 on: April 13, 2005, 07:18:50 PM »
Me neither, I always end up rhyming "dandelion" with "cardboard box" or something -_-
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Re: MY poem I writing poetry plz read
« Reply #11 on: April 14, 2005, 04:18:26 PM »
ITS SHIT! XD
nah, only joking!
love it hun, really I do.
And you know i would tell you if it was! XD
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« Reply #12 on: June 28, 2005, 09:35:37 PM »
I am nothing. The Shell of a Whore, the backstabbed, Used abused ready to die, But this knife won't cut me....

(simple and short just my msn name but thought i'd put it here)
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Re: No name.
« Reply #13 on: June 28, 2005, 10:24:51 PM »
Sounds pretty depressing, but angry at the same time.

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Re: No name.
« Reply #14 on: June 29, 2005, 04:23:59 PM »
its so depressing and angry, violent at the same time!
i relaly like it.. though it isnt true..
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