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| Shirotatsu |
 Jul 25 2005, 01:49 PM
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 天衣無縫の亡霊  Group: Moderator Posts: 8,942 Joined: 9-June 05 From: Gensoukyou Member No.: 20  |
I don't really need it up anymore, so...yeah. I have it saved in my computer...
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| Docs Fox |
Jul 25 2005, 02:49 PM
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Magic Knight Group: Members Posts: 8,983 Joined: 5-April 05 From: Bakersfield, California Member No.: 17 |
^.^ As a story I enjoyed it very much. It works and is written well for that. As a poem? I dislike long poems so I'm a little biase about it. I believe poems should be short...and I even think if you wanted this a poem you could put all of the same emotion from that story into 20-40 lines of poetry. =P
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Shirotatsu Um...yes... Jul 25 2005, 01:49 PM
Shirotatsu Re: Um...yes... Jul 25 2005, 02:59 PM Zagato Re: Um...yes... Jul 25 2005, 04:38 PM Shirotatsu Re: Um...yes... Jul 25 2005, 04:54 PM Zagato Re: Um...yes... Jul 26 2005, 11:48 AM Docs Fox Re: Um...yes... Jul 26 2005, 01:47 PM
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