I don't really need it up anymore, so...yeah. I have it saved in my computer...

^.^ As a story I enjoyed it very much. It works and is written well for that. As a poem? I dislike long poems so I'm a little biase about it. I believe poems should be short...and I even think if you wanted this a poem you could put all of the same emotion from that story into 20-40 lines of poetry. =P

...that's what I was aiming to do, but didn't...*falls* Oh well...things will work as they will...



...anyways, thank you for reading...^^...

Well... I haven?t read lot of poems in english but I still like this one as long as it is, I mean, shorter it would be lie a real poem but for me it is like a tale, a story and I love stories, had a great time reading it, I think you?re talented Shirotatsu-San...



By the way! I don?t know ya, I?m Zagato! nice to meet you!

Ah, thank you...



...and nice to meet you too...I'm Shirotatsu...and you may call me "Shiro" with any suffix you choose...-san, -chan...you choose! ^^

Thank you Shiro-Chan!!!



You?re so nice ^_^



How long have you been in this forum?

^.^ Shiro-chan has been here about a month less than I and I think I started coming here in late October of last year.

I know I told you what I thought about it at the IM, demo...I'll just restate what I said.



Sad...interesting...& very good.



Sad...but good.