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| Shirotatsu |
 Jul 25 2005, 01:49 PM
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I don't really need it up anymore, so...yeah. I have it saved in my computer...
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| Docs Fox |
Jul 25 2005, 02:49 PM
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Magic Knight Group: Members Posts: 8,983 Joined: 5-April 05 From: Bakersfield, California Member No.: 17 |
^.^ As a story I enjoyed it very much. It works and is written well for that. As a poem? I dislike long poems so I'm a little biase about it. I believe poems should be short...and I even think if you wanted this a poem you could put all of the same emotion from that story into 20-40 lines of poetry. =P
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| Shirotatsu |
Jul 25 2005, 02:59 PM
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天衣無縫の亡霊 Group: Moderator Posts: 8,942 Joined: 9-June 05 From: Gensoukyou Member No.: 20 |
...that's what I was aiming to do, but didn't...*falls* Oh well...things will work as they will...
...anyways, thank you for reading...^^...  "Soreja, saigo no onegai....... Boku no koto, wasurete......" "Then, my final wish.......Forget about me......" - Tsukimiya Ayu |
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| Zagato |
Jul 25 2005, 04:38 PM
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Well... I haven?t read lot of poems in english but I still like this one as long as it is, I mean, shorter it would be lie a real poem but for me it is like a tale, a story and I love stories, had a great time reading it, I think you?re talented Shirotatsu-San...
By the way! I don?t know ya, I?m Zagato! nice to meet you!  |
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| Shirotatsu |
Jul 25 2005, 04:54 PM
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天衣無縫の亡霊 Group: Moderator Posts: 8,942 Joined: 9-June 05 From: Gensoukyou Member No.: 20 |
Ah, thank you...
...and nice to meet you too...I'm Shirotatsu...and you may call me "Shiro" with any suffix you choose...-san, -chan...you choose! ^^ "Soreja, saigo no onegai....... Boku no koto, wasurete......" "Then, my final wish.......Forget about me......" - Tsukimiya Ayu |
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| Zagato |
Jul 26 2005, 11:48 AM
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Mage Apprentice Group: Members Posts: 39 Joined: 11-July 05 Member No.: 32 |
Thank you Shiro-Chan!!!
You?re so nice ^_^ How long have you been in this forum? |
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| Docs Fox |
Jul 26 2005, 01:47 PM
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Magic Knight Group: Members Posts: 8,983 Joined: 5-April 05 From: Bakersfield, California Member No.: 17 |
^.^ Shiro-chan has been here about a month less than I and I think I started coming here in late October of last year.
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| Yuki Fukurou |
Jul 26 2005, 09:40 PM
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I know I told you what I thought about it at the IM, demo...I'll just restate what I said.
Sad...interesting...& very good. Sad...but good.  As I learned from my predecessor Mr. Bond, I never joke about my work - Q "Die Another Day". |
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