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FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« on: November 15, 2004, 04:56:49 PM »
yay i wrote this 4 school it short but i like it i was told to write a poem about my childhood and i can't remember a full part of my chilhood just faded litle bits and it had to be of a part wich i was being particularly childish but i have always felt the same age in my head  so instead i wrote this  ;D

Iremember wen i crawled
i remember being 2 and 3
i remember 5 and 7
but always i was me

i don't remember being silly
i just remember being small
i can't see one clear moment
i can just feel it all

im saving being silly until im 43
because i've never been childish
atleast in my memory!

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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2004, 08:14:14 PM »
way better than my english poem :P

*glomps*


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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #2 on: November 15, 2004, 08:41:11 PM »
That's actually a really good way of making a childhood poem without remembering your childhood...
>_<
I'd have been completely screwed...

I like the poem anyway, it's short but to the point. ^_^





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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #3 on: November 16, 2004, 02:05:22 AM »
It's coolies Tom! Teeheehee ^__^

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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2004, 07:15:13 PM »
YAY!!!! a sucsessfull poem ^__^

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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2004, 07:29:55 PM »
i don't do poems i write storys that is where i get my characters from ^_^ i love my storys cause i am creative yup


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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #6 on: November 20, 2004, 03:00:43 PM »
You forgot to put in the Oak tree and the dead bird, but apart from that I really like it ^_^ Hehe, it's pretty much what I feel too, which means it's a successful poem from my point of view at least.



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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #7 on: November 20, 2004, 08:39:17 PM »
tom your poem was RIVITING *twitches fingers while saying riviting* i give it 2 thumbs up


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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #8 on: November 21, 2004, 05:47:45 PM »
i cant remeber much of my childhood cos i blocked the memories.... my relatives tell me stuff they remember even though i cant

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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #9 on: November 29, 2004, 06:04:39 PM »
i love my poem!!!

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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #10 on: November 30, 2004, 08:27:19 PM »
too right you should
*glomps*

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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #11 on: December 04, 2004, 01:23:21 PM »
awwww *watches tom and amy glomp* okay now i am hungry


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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #12 on: December 04, 2004, 01:57:06 PM »
WTF? your hungry?

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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #13 on: December 05, 2004, 11:25:15 AM »
because yesterday i was hungry now i ain't ^_^


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Re: FletchDude! has a poem!!!
« Reply #14 on: December 21, 2004, 11:29:09 AM »
O.o ok....

tom you should put up that poem you wrote and put up on VW.. if you dont then i will cos it be coolies!

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