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Sensei Alex-chan's poetry
« on: March 18, 2005, 01:47:44 PM »
I gave you everything; my heart and my soul,
Now all i have left is this lump of black coal.
And if i had the chance i would trow it at your head,
and wish with my heart that you would drop down dead.

I left my friends; i left my family,
Becasue i thought you were oh so manly.
I gave up my job;I gave up my life,
so i could be your dear sweet wife.

Is she fat or is she thin?
Does she always make you grin?
I thought i did but i was wrong,
Even when i wore my bright pink thong.

I knew you always loved your dog,
So i threw him down the bog.
Next I'm going to come for you,
And I'll throw you down the loo too!

By Hayley, Alex and Deeana in English.
« Last Edit: March 18, 2005, 01:51:37 PM by Chibi Plum »
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude ( a funny version)
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2005, 01:50:55 PM »
And the serious version.

(the 1st 2 verses are the same so read those b4 u read the next 2)

I bet she smells like cheap perfume,
Whenever you walk in the room.
I bet she's small; i bet she's fat,
Like an old sewer rat.

As i hold this prety knife,
I want to hack away at your life.
Watch her scream as you decay,
I will have the very last say.

*Evil laugh and dramtic music with lightening sounds and pictures in background*

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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude ( a funny version)
« Reply #2 on: March 18, 2005, 01:52:33 PM »
Quote from: Chibi Plum on March 18, 2005, 01:50:55 PM
And the serious version.

(the 1st 2 verses are the same so read those b4 u read the next 2)

I bet she smells like cheap perfume,
Whenever you walk in the room.
I bet she's small; i bet she's fat,
Like an old sewer rat.

As i hold this prety knife,
I want to hack away at your life.
Watch her scream as you decay,
I will have the very last say.

*Evil laugh and dramtic music with lightening sounds and pictures in background*

 From Hayley: eat your heart out Amy!!
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #3 on: March 18, 2005, 05:17:35 PM »
3 things

1. amazing poem dudes me likes loads!!!! *glomps*
2. triple posting
3. i will not eat my heart.. espically with a spoon XD
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #4 on: March 21, 2005, 01:41:27 PM »
i did not do that last post i swear. sure i duoble posted but not the 3rd time.
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #5 on: March 21, 2005, 04:46:13 PM »
ok....

'As i hold this prety knife,
I want to hack away at your life.'
very powerful lines!
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #6 on: March 23, 2005, 01:22:22 PM »
yes i made the pretty knife part and H made the hacking part  muhahahaha

*strokes cheek contousoly* ooohhh gold stars.
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #7 on: March 25, 2005, 07:59:05 PM »
wheee gold stars!
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #8 on: April 04, 2005, 05:48:36 PM »
*hacks at things with pretty knife*
YAY HACKING! XD
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #9 on: April 13, 2005, 12:56:18 PM »
cool siggy H.
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #10 on: April 13, 2005, 05:18:11 PM »
me thinking you should change the word
pretty
into
petty (spelling)
to make it seem like something so small can do so much damage

but tis up to you!
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #11 on: April 14, 2005, 04:21:41 PM »
that line was from alex not me!
Complain to her! XD
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #12 on: April 15, 2005, 03:38:29 PM »
im not complaining XD

but okies ^_^
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Re: Sweet sweet revenge dude
« Reply #13 on: April 18, 2005, 12:57:02 PM »
bo coz the knife is pretty to the woamn. her guy is cheating on her. a knife is prorbaly the prettiest thing ever then.
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« Reply #14 on: October 07, 2005, 12:43:28 PM »
I wanted to be your friend,
to stay by your side - the truthful one.
I wanted to always be there for you,
the shoulder you could cry on,
the friend waiting for your tears.

But time is harsh to us and changed me and my heart,
and as more tears fall i grow tired.
I am tried of waiting for you to smile honestly,
I am tired of you hiding behind a pretend mask,
I am tired with your negative attitude,
I am tired of feeling weighed down by it.

My tiredness is turning to annoyance,
and then from that to hatred.
I can no longer wait for you as i pretend behind my new mask.
You have changed,
and it annoys me that you are no loner who you once were - cheerful, happy.
I no longer want to be here...by your side.

You pointless depresssion ties me down and rips my wings,
but  I want them to grow again....
so i can be free.
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