Author Topic: Shaman King fan fic chapter 3  (Read 458 times)

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Shaman King fan fic chapter 3
« on: October 24, 2004, 10:48:15 AM »
CHAPTER 3.

“ So where do you want to go Anna?”  Oh asked as she walked down the stairs an hour after the now forgotten bathroom incident.
“ Oh.  I guess I don’t really mind that much Oh.”  Anna replied.  Her heart was beating faster and she felt that whenever she looked into Yoh’s eyes she could and would do anything for him.  With no one but him around she felt oddly feminine and she thought that Oh looked so cute compared too normally.  She blushed at this thought and reminded herself that he was her friend and nothing more.  Whatever you say boss but you know your kidding yourself that annoying voice was back revealing her true feeling again. Anna without realising it had blushed crimson and Yoh smiled warmly.  Hey had I made her blush again and I made her smile I just hope she’s happy and not sad being here.  I know she wants me to be shaman king and all that but… well I guess I’m afraid that ill lose her along the way.  Either through death or she chooses someone else and ill admit it know I am in love with Kouyama Anna.

They ended up in a crowded cinema watching a pointless film with no plot or anything.  They were happy to be with eachother and as the film deteriorated even more they walked out.  The fresh cool night air that greeted then instantly refreshed then and any thoughts of sleep were forgotten.  They walked in an awkward silence for a while each not knowing what to say to the other.  Yoh again was debating with his feelings over Anna.  Anna on the other hand was trying to figure hers out. When they finally spoke they spoke the same thing at the same time.
“ There’s something I need to tell you.”
“ Um… you first Yoh offered.”
“ No and unless you want to do an triple long run tomorrow then I suggest you go first.”  Anna said firmly.
“ Hey that’s blackmail!”  Yoh defended himself.  Anna just gave him a look and he did what he was told because you don’t mess with Anna.
“ I was going to say how beautiful the stars are tonight twinkling above us.  The remind me of the twinkle in your eyes the simple beauty and elegance of them” Yoh stopped and starred deeply into Anna’s black eyes smiling.  Anna was thankful of the dark as it hid her burning scarlet face.  Trying to regain her authority she replied Yoh sarcastically,
“ Asakura Yoh you stop that romantic and sloppy talk right now.”  Yoh just laughed and said,
“ Ok then I will……. If you can catch me!” even as he spoke them words he had sped off.
“ Asakura Yoh I’m warning you!”  Anna ran after him.  As she rounded the corner she screamed and fell on the floor unconscious.  Yoh who had heard the scream ran back to see Anna slumped on the floor hardly breathing.  Her face was freezing but there was a pulse.  Yoh thanked every thing he passes as he raced to the hospital with the limp Anna in his arms.  He rushed in through the hospital doors and shouted for help, tears ran down his face uncontrollably.  As he handed Anna over like a toy at Christmas to the doctors who rushed her off behind a pair of doors.

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Re: Shaman King fan fic chapter 3
« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2004, 08:23:12 PM »
I've read the fanfic so far, and I really like it! Your style flows nicely and you don't let any boring parts creep in, though you don't try to make everything happen at once. I don't watch the show and I don't know anything about it so I can't vouch for legitimacy but hey, I still like it. ^_^ Keep writing!



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Re: Shaman King fan fic chapter 3
« Reply #2 on: November 13, 2004, 06:11:12 PM »
thanks caz chan

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