Author Topic: <Blue and Crimson Tears - Froggie's Poetry> <Last updated: September 3rd>  (Read 7831 times)

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Lost

I sit on the wall where I used to talk to you,
But now it’s moss covered and neglected,
That’s how I feel now,
I walk the path we used to walk down,
Forgotten and alone now,
That’s how I feel.

Nothing now can change it,
It’s your fault I’m like this,

No one now to help me find my way,
I’m wandering round in circles,
I’m lost in the place you once called home,
Tripping over lost thoughts and feelings,
I’m lost.

I stare at the tree that you carved our names on,
But now ivy smothers them,
Like I’m smothered by reality,
I cry at the site of the our secret place,
It’s lonely and cold,
Like inside of me,

Nothing now can change it,
It’s your fault I’m like this,

No one now to help me find my way,
I’m wandering round in circles,
I’m lost in the place you once called home,
Tripping over lost thoughts and feelings,
I’m lost.

I’m lost in our world,
The one you used to call ours,
Come back to me now,

No one now to help me find my way,
I’m wandering round in circles,
I’m lost in the place you once called home,
Tripping over lost thoughts and feelings,
I’m lost.
« Last Edit: September 05, 2006, 02:26:00 PM by Froggie chan »

"The prince is never going to come, everyone knows that and maybe Sleeping Beauty's dead.."
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Re: Lost
« Reply #1 on: June 19, 2004, 05:31:30 PM »
It sounds like you just broke up with a boyfriend Amy-chan. *Hugz* It's very well written and I love the metaphors that you use, they really bring out your feelings. ^_^

Have you written many others like this Amy-chan? You're really good! ^_^

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Re: Lost
« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2004, 01:08:47 AM »
hmmm brings back the memorsy... have posted this one befor some were I think and will post it again...



My life now ended, now when you have left me
My love you spread across the field of sadness
On rosen leafs you were buried
And so as to your eternal beauty
On wings of sadness you will travel
Against your eternal sleep
Humanity will pay the price for my remorse and pain
I will bring it to it's knes, slowly make it fade away
Slowly to be forgotten
This world all so wrong
I will burn it all down and watch it glow in the dark
I know I have done wrong, but so shall it be
Because my life were ended a long time ago
Now I walk across the astral sky
To find the hidden door so we can be united forever
At last I close my eyes to join the wind of passion
To feel my soul burn within myself
Slowly fade away....
you can take my life but you can never take my ideal

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Re: Lost
« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2004, 09:24:01 PM »
prettiness

me have other poems like this one...

HOLDING ON
Drowned in your sorrow,
I try to show a brave face,
But inside I’m crumbling,
I’m fading away.

You broke my heart once,
And the pain is still there,
Even after all these years,
I long for your face.

You let my hand slip,
You let me fall,
Into the darkness,
Of forgotten hope,

I can hear your voice echoing,
Off stone walls,
But you’re too far away,
We drifted apart.

I’m holding on to that wish,
The one we made,
Under the stars,
To be together always.


by the way i've never had a boyfriend in the 14 years of my life

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Re: Lost
« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2004, 04:25:31 PM »
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by the way i've never had a boyfriend in the 14 years of my life

Me too, we should start a club...
I've seen your poems before Amy, and I think theyre really good...

But Framer, your poem there is really pretty, and written really well, especially since English isnt your first language. (I think thats true, anyway...)

It seems everyone has a creative side apart from me. It really sucks...



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Re: Lost
« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2004, 07:33:55 PM »
u have a creative side and i act better than i can write anyways
 
ur creative side is writing sitcoms

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Re: Lost
« Reply #6 on: July 04, 2004, 03:23:15 AM »
hmmm *think about leting mjh reopen the old poetry corner...*
*thinks about it again*hmmm nah better skip that
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Re: Lost
« Reply #7 on: July 04, 2004, 08:45:20 PM »
*coughs*
Im crap at the sitcom thing, and creativeness altogether.

Framer, why dont you ask MJ to open up the poetry corner?
Love to see some more of your work. ^__^



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Re: Lost
« Reply #8 on: July 04, 2004, 11:16:54 PM »
dont wanto state any reson but that topic will remain closet or even better be removed completly
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Re: Lost
« Reply #9 on: July 05, 2004, 12:13:10 AM »
The Poetry Corner topic was moved to the archives, so it could be brought back if you wanted me to do that Framer. But I know why you wanted it taken down, so I won't bring it back just because someone else might ask for it. The request would have to come from you Framer. If you would like it permanently removed I can do that too.

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Re: Lost
« Reply #10 on: July 05, 2004, 12:57:18 AM »
it can stay the way it is and it feels good to know that it wont be open with out me saying so... sorry for formulating it in a bad way but it is to many things back there and it is best that they stay "back there"
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Re: Lost
« Reply #11 on: July 05, 2004, 01:44:26 PM »
thats okies even though all my poems are depresing me wrote a new one last week...

DREAM

Floating through space
Searching for the light
Time standing still
Friends are stars
The moon is my love
Both are gone
Blackness smothers all life.

Memories glazed in silver
Swimming in the black abyss,
That is my mind,
Crying out in despair,
No answer to my call,
No emotion felt,
In my heart.


What is it with me and depressing stuff i wish i could write happy stuff

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Re: Lost
« Reply #12 on: July 05, 2004, 01:48:08 PM »
Hey, at least its good.
We could have a new poetry corner instead of opening up the old one, I suppose. Just an idea, methinks.
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Re: Lost
« Reply #13 on: July 05, 2004, 03:14:51 PM »
wont stop you but I can promis to post there
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Re: Lost
« Reply #14 on: July 05, 2004, 04:07:47 PM »
A few times I've seen threads reincarnated on boards, and most of the time people will just add a number to the title like The Poetry Corner 2, The Poetry Corner 3, etc. So if anyone wants to start an new one, be my guest. ^_^

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