Topic: <Blue and Crimson Tears - Froggie's Poetry> <Last updated: September 3rd>

[..:: Chibi Plum ::..]

i know a nonsense poem. heheh my told dad told me:

one fine day in the midly of the night,
2 dead men got up to fight,
back to back they faced each other,
they drew their swords and shot each other.

anyway other than that coolies.

[Froggie chan]

XD that rawks alex =P

[Maki-chan]

They're both pretty coolies A & A ^_^ The Alice in Wonderland theme goes along nicely with yours too Amy-chan. ^_^

[Froggie chan]

Thanks MJ-chan ^_^

[..:: Chibi Plum ::..]

I forgot it and i can;t be bothered to read it and i just want to post so that why i'm here O_o

[Froggie chan]

This poem was inspired by a friend of mine on gaia. She was sexually molestered by her ex boyfriend, and often cybered with other guys. She told me about it and it prompted a poem, shes seen it and she does like it.. i dont like the end though.. >_<

Online Lover

Hard drive threatening fire,
Flicking monitors, Hypnotic trance,
Lust vented through worn wires,
My virtual lover,
My unrealistic love,
Laughing, teasing, words translated,
Across the oceans, seas, forests,
Through satellites, emails fly,
Wingless, heartless messages soar,
Self centred passion, flow of enamored words,
Artificial sexual relationship, but,
Its not real, It means nothing, harmless fun,
Until the real guy wants you,
This time there’s no choice,
There’s no pleasure in hate.

[Meilinrose]

Very different to anything else I've seen you write, and very powerful too - I loved it! I'm feeling inspired now myself XD (Wasn't that the other way round last time?)

[Froggie chan]

thanks.. and whoa your inspired o_0
Its different yeah, i noticed that too.. /edited the end of the poem

[Maki-chan]

It is very different, but very good too. It's a subject that I've always found strange, because like the poem indicates, cybering isn't much more than roleplaying. That's the way that I've seen it because I'd been married and involved with the real thing long before I'd found the internet.

[Froggie chan]

I was trying to make it seem like fun until reality comes in. it was my friends escape, she was too scared to end the realtionship and used her roleplaying skills to vent out her anguish. Its a strange way of doing it i know but it worked for her *shrug*

[Froggie chan]

Well this is now going to be my poetry thread from now on and to get the ball rolling (cliche >.<) heres a poem i dug up, edited and am proberly re-posting!
I hope you enjoy my poetry and more critical responses are more than welcomed! ^_^

Sometimes.

Sometimes I wish for the answers,
Sometimes I wish for the truth,
The same things I wish for,
And everyday I wish for you.

Sometimes I cry on my own,
Sometimes I cry with everyone around,
Still the tears forn,
The endless battle, my final fall,

Sometimes I...
I dont want you here,
Break away from my embrace,
Stay away from the monster i am!

Sometimes I feel like death,
Sometimes I feel like im dead,
I still feel the same,
As I lie dead with your picture in hand.

[cookie munster]

O.o, wow, ^^
*claps*
thats good

[Froggie chan]

Thanks Jane! ^_^
I wouldnt consider it one of my best but i never do ^_^;;;

[Froggie chan]

Im not sure whether to consider this poem finished yet, im struggling with an ending or something to add. It just feels to me unfinished. If any disagrees I'd like to know with reasons if thats ok ^.^

Ying Yang.
Hear her voice,
An angel singing,
I am the demon,
Forever lost in your bloody heart,
Hunting you out,
My blood splattered prey!

I am the monster,
Your darkest nightmare,
She is your seraph,
Your only love,
I am the shadow on this moonlit night,
She is the candle,
Forever burning too fucking bright.

Gaze into my corrupted soul,
Repair my shattered smile,
Give into eternal infatuation,
Revive my rotten heart,
Don’t leave me alone!

[Froggie chan]

Well its about bloody time I got some poems here >_<
So heres the new ones!

Nothing Special.

There I go again,
In another mans naked embrace,
I’m just another angel fallen from grace,
This isn’t the Romeo and Juliet romance you crave,
This love won’t send us to our premature grave,
I’m stuck watching my holo-genetic heart bleed,
Basking in the light of the broken hearted,
I can feel my lies,
Your constant cries,
Pleasure, pain,
I can’t tell anymore,
These wings are disappearing
My soul forever burning,
I don’t care don’t you see?
I’m not the perfect princess you want me to be,
I’m lying here, Next to someone I don’t know,
I’m nothing special, Just a snowflake in the snow.


I'll keep falling through,
Your empty hands,
I cant be caught,
I cant be saved,
I'll keep hiding behind this broken frame,
A photograph burning,
The edges curling,
Butterflies swarming,
Silent mourning,
My fatal attraction,
Your empty reaction,
I'm screaming,
I'm crying,
I'm dying.

The second is un-named and un-finished..

blargh!