Topic: Darkness of Love

[Tyreal]

Have you ever had that sense of Dread?
When she appears I now she is my Bane
Destruction of my World
destruction of me
She comes for me Now Beckoning for me.
Dread falls upon me with an eerie stillness
She is almost upon me beckoning for my Soul
Darkness of the void centerises on me
I look upon her Horror fills my Eyes
But I hold a trick up my Sleeve
Determination Fills my Heart
My One trick is soon to arise
as she comes, Beckoning for me

but as she does, I pull out my Final Triumph Card
it's a simple word as much as an Action, Love
My Friends
My Family
it's all I need to fulfill my life
as I have these and many more
I banish her to the darkness of her Realm
All Because I have people there for me
who care, who love and who share
I am Complete

[Maki-chan]

That's pretty good Tyr.^^ We all have to face challenges from time to time, but with help from those around us we can overcome anything.

[Framer]

that was really good tyr ^^;;  way better then me.... I hafto say that you are way better on writing then me ^^;;

[Tyreal]

that was really good tyr ^^;;  way better then me.... I hafto say that you are way better on writing then me ^^;;

Thank you ^^ But You write pretty good poems yourself ^^

[Framer]

thanks but the most of the last posts I have posted in the poetry corner was lyris and thos I whont take credit for.... and the "poems" I make is mostly plane text with feelings in and that is not that hard to make but thanks for the credit that thanks for not hacking down on my spelling in them poems.... ^^;; I hafto say it wold be really funn to counter write with you...

[Framer]

what do you say Tyreal..? only for the fun of it..... I will let you start and set the topic the poems schold be abut..... pleas.... I really want some one to counter write with....

[Maki-chan]

Sorry that I can't help out with that Framer, but only Vogons would like poetry written by me.  

[Framer]

I belive that if give it chans you can write also mjh..... I am not that good and I only started one day becors I feelt for it.... poetry is nothing you can stress it is somthing that hafto take itīs time to get done.... ask peh I think she will agree with me on this one... it wold be really fun if she posted a poem also on the board if she feels for it becors she writes really good...^_^  and there is really many here that I belive can write that good also only if they give it a trye....

[Tyreal]

Ok it'll be fun ^^

[Framer]

okay^_^ this will be really fun....
*shakes hand*