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battlefield of Broken hearts - not wrote by me... o_o
« on: October 10, 2005, 08:02:17 PM »
This is by my friend Hollie, and she doesnt mind me posting this up.
I love this poem she wrote to bits its amazing! I had no idea she could write like this. Anyways enjoy! ^_^

'Battlefield of Broken Hearts'
 
The battlefield of Love and Hate
an endless war enrolls our fate
find target,take aim,the journey starts
whats left behind but broken hearts
I choose my path and venture on
To find true love before its gone
Whats cruel is fair,whats lost is gained
His love is mine to be retained
 
Along my quest i make to slay the demons of my dreams
But no samurai is strong enough to kill the aching screams
No drugs or poison cruel enough to cure my broken heart
The damgae is all done now as i watch my love depart
 
The Battlefield of Broken Hearts
These bullets sting like poison darts
They pierce my soul and break in two
My tears are shed,the pain still new
The blood it drains my body dry
I go to scream but hear no cry
 
Injured soldiers gunned down in pain
A heart to mend,but all in vain
For once they're up they're pushed bk down
With no more love they slowly drown
 
I am an injured soldier and lost what i just had
But destiny will take its course,be it good or bad
My fate is at a dead end in this evrlasting game
My heart it aches to be with him but i must take the blame
If i could have a second chance id wish upon a star
Id swim the stars and ride the waves to be right where you are
Id hold you close,id watch you dream and smile whilst you sleep
Id fight in every battle just to know your mine to keep
 
The battlefield of Love and Hate
an endless war enrolls our fate
and when we die,the journeys through
the war is won when Love is true.
« Last Edit: October 11, 2005, 08:19:37 PM by Froggie chan »

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Re: battlefield of Broken hearts - not wrote by me... o_o
« Reply #1 on: October 31, 2005, 11:19:02 AM »
that is really good. i meam REALLY good.



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Re: battlefield of Broken hearts - not wrote by me... o_o
« Reply #2 on: November 02, 2005, 05:11:31 PM »
I know. I cant even critise it a little.. o.o

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Re: battlefield of Broken hearts - not wrote by me... o_o
« Reply #3 on: December 30, 2005, 05:19:25 PM »
*gasp*
are you guys allways this good!
im your consiounce, which i cant even spell, hear me know, you shall not write any more good ladidas, aka,  poems, ^^;;