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Mr Suicide

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If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« on: April 21, 2005, 06:01:09 PM »
OK..... Here's a crummy little peice i made in school.
I cant do poetry.... vv

There was a blue cat,
That owned a hat,
That was on a mat,
That suddenly burst into flames killing the whole family. ^^

I love the ending. Ahhhh.... *Day dreams of burning buildings*
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Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2005, 07:50:31 PM »
disturbing yes


but short sweet and funny! XD
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Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« Reply #2 on: April 21, 2005, 08:19:41 PM »
I shall make more short ones.....

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Who could not Can, Can,
For his leg was blown off in a tragic accident in the car park of the little chef on the m4.

I thankyou! *Bows*
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Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« Reply #3 on: April 21, 2005, 08:56:02 PM »
XD coolies...

reminds me of my Haikus... should I post those up here?
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Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« Reply #4 on: April 22, 2005, 09:28:24 AM »
Sure, i would like to read them.
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Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« Reply #5 on: April 22, 2005, 03:29:49 PM »
Quote from: Sheepy-chan on April 21, 2005, 08:56:02 PM
XD coolies...

reminds me of my Haikus... should I post those up here?

havent i told you to post them up ages ago liz?
and yeah you should damnit!
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Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« Reply #6 on: April 22, 2005, 04:24:09 PM »
XD great, I love the first one.
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« Reply #7 on: April 24, 2005, 07:13:24 PM »
Thankyou people, thankyou.
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Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« Reply #8 on: April 25, 2005, 03:52:41 PM »
the cat didnt get hurt right?
*huggles cat*nooooooooooooo!
T_T

anyways very cool.
Me likes the second one better.

and liz's haikus just rock! XD
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Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« Reply #9 on: April 27, 2005, 02:53:01 PM »
I want a spontaneously combustible cat... T_T
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Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« Reply #10 on: April 27, 2005, 03:11:35 PM »
i helped her write *some of her haikus
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Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
« Reply #11 on: October 23, 2005, 02:41:52 PM »
Quote from: Mr Suicide on April 21, 2005, 06:01:09 PM
OK..... Here's a crummy little peice i made in school.
I cant do poetry.... vv

There was a blue cat,
That owned a hat,
That was on a mat,
That suddenly burst into flames killing the whole family. ^^

I love the ending. Ahhhh.... *Day dreams of burning buildings*
heh heh, thats so f***** (dont want to be moaned at)
funny, wowies, full time poet in no time
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