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Main Discussion => The Poetry Corner => Topic started by: Mr Suicide on April 21, 2005, 06:01:09 PM

Title: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: Mr Suicide on April 21, 2005, 06:01:09 PM

OK..... Here's a crummy little peice i made in school.
I cant do poetry.... vv

There was a blue cat,
That owned a hat,
That was on a mat,
That suddenly burst into flames killing the whole family. ^^

I love the ending. Ahhhh.... *Day dreams of burning buildings*

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: Froggie chan on April 21, 2005, 07:50:31 PM

disturbing yes


but short sweet and funny! XD

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: Mr Suicide on April 21, 2005, 08:19:41 PM

I shall make more short ones.....

I once knew a man,
Who could not Can, Can,
For his leg was blown off in a tragic accident in the car park of the little chef on the m4.

I thankyou! *Bows*

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: Haggis-chan on April 21, 2005, 08:56:02 PM

XD coolies...

reminds me of my Haikus... should I post those up here?

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: Mr Suicide on April 22, 2005, 09:28:24 AM

Sure, i would like to read them.

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: Froggie chan on April 22, 2005, 03:29:49 PM

Quote from: Sheepy-chan on April 21, 2005, 08:56:02 PM

XD coolies...

reminds me of my Haikus... should I post those up here?

havent i told you to post them up ages ago liz?
and yeah you should damnit!

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: Schitzoid on April 22, 2005, 04:24:09 PM

XD great, I love the first one.

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: Mr Suicide on April 24, 2005, 07:13:24 PM

Thankyou people, thankyou.

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: minimoon on April 25, 2005, 03:52:41 PM

the cat didnt get hurt right?
*huggles cat*nooooooooooooo!
T_T

anyways very cool.
Me likes the second one better.

and liz's haikus just rock! XD

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: Haggis-chan on April 27, 2005, 02:53:01 PM

I want a spontaneously combustible cat... T_T

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: Froggie chan on April 27, 2005, 03:11:35 PM

i helped her write *some of her haikus
<.<
>.>

Title: Re: If you want good poetry, DONT look here....
Post by: cookie munster on October 23, 2005, 02:41:52 PM

Quote from: Mr Suicide on April 21, 2005, 06:01:09 PM

OK..... Here's a crummy little peice i made in school.
I cant do poetry.... vv

There was a blue cat,
That owned a hat,
That was on a mat,
That suddenly burst into flames killing the whole family. ^^

I love the ending. Ahhhh.... *Day dreams of burning buildings*

heh heh, thats so f***** (dont want to be moaned at)
funny, wowies, full time poet in no time