MKR Chapter 3 Options

[Shiidou Hikaru]

This story begins some time after the conclusion of the second series.



It has been a gloriously beautiful day in June. Hikaru has waited patiently in line for her turn to board the elevator for the trip up to the observation deck of the Tokyo Tower. Today there's no smile on her face. She boards the elevator when her turn comes. On the trip up she looks down at the floor, oblivious to the view outside of the elevator's windows and the other people crowded in there around her. "This is one day of all, that I wished would never come." Hikaru thinks to herself. After a few minutes the elevator arrives at its destination and all of the passengers disembark, along with Hikaru. Walking slowly out into the observation deck, Hikaru starts to look around for a couple of familiar faces. Before long a voice is heard from the crowd: "Hikaru! Hikaru-chan!" She turns towards the voice and Hikaru sees immediately her two best friends, Umi and Fuu, walking towards her, both smiling. Hikaru's face lights up as she sees her two friends. All three come together and embrace in an affectionate hug. "It's so good to see you again Hikaru-chan" said Umi "But, I was starting to wonder if you were going to come." "The line was very long and I had to wait, I'm sorry." replied Hikaru. "That's okay Hikaru-chan." Fuu said. "At least you had a very pleasant day today for the wait." Fuu continued with a smile. "Yes, Fuu-chan it is a nice day today. Very nice weather .. for our last day together, before we say goodbye forever." replied Hikaru. The three girls, best friends closer than sisters, all looked at each other solemnly for a moment ...



The setting for our story today: It has been four years since the conclusion of the Magic Knights' last mission to Cephiro. In the warm month of June in Tokyo, the final year of high school draws to a close for each of them now. This day marks the completion of final exams for them with only the commencement ceremonies remaining. After which Umi and Fuu will leave Japan for university studies abroad - Umi in Europe and Fuu in America. Hikaru will remain behind to study at a local university in Tokyo. This occasion today will be their final day together before parting their separate ways.



... "This place isn't very different is it?" Umi said, "Just like it was the day we first me each other. It seems like only yesterday." "Yes, Umi-chan, but us, we have changed. More than I ever could have imagined back then, before we were summoned to Cephiro." replied Fuu. "Cephiro. I wonder what has been happening there." Hikaru added, "It seemed to have recovered well the last time we were able to see it three years ago." "Hmm, I don't know." Umi answered, "but maybe we could try to take one last look today?" "Yes, I kind of like that idea Umi-chan. Hikaru-chan, you can still do it right?" Fuu asked. Hikaru answered, "I think so, It's been a long time since I've tried using the power of the pillar. It's something that I try not to think about too much anymore. Having it makes me feel strange when I'm here in Tokyo." Hikaru walked over to the windows at the edge of the observation deck, with Umi and Fuu close behind her. Hikaru looked out at the view over the city, then reached into her shirt and pulled out the gold pendant that Lantis had given her. She held it in the palm of one hand and closed her eyes. Within herself Hikaru reached out to the world of Cephiro with the inner feelings of her heart. Soon a great golden light, seen only by the three girls, shone in through the windows of the observation deck. Hikaru opened her eyes and the three of them beheld the view of Cephiro from high above.



The intense feelings brought back by the memories of Cephiro rushed upon the three of them as they gazed upon the land. Soon though, the gaze of wonder upon their faces melted into concern. "Something isn't right." remarked Umi. "Yes, you're right Umi-chan. Something about Cephiro has changed, but I can't tell what it is." Fuu agreed. Umi continued, "The scenery is slightly different. I mean all of the landmarks are as they should be, but what is that large white area on the land next to the sea?" Umi points her finger at the area in question and Fuu sees it. "Hmm .." Fuu muses. She looks away for a moment and sees the streets of Tokyo below. Then she looks back at Umi. "It's a city Umi-chan. A very large one, like Tokyo." Fuu concluded. "My goodness you're right Fuu-chan." replied the amazed Umi. "But where did it come from? How could they build a huge city like that in only a few years?" "I don't know Umi-chan." answered Fuu, "and look around it - the air and sky are no longer clear, they have become polluted by the human activity there." she continued. "The sea near the city has also changed, like the sky it has also become polluted." Umi added. "Has something happened to the people of Cephiro?" Umi asked. "What's the matter with them? Can you tell Hikaru-chan? Hikaru?"



Hikaru has been silent for all of this discussion. Her concern for what she now sees in Cephiro has brought tears to her eyes. "Hikaru-chan, what's wrong?" Fuu asked in a concerned way. Hikaru turned her back to the view of Cephiro for a moment and faced her friends, the tears welling in her eyes. "You can sense it too Umi, Fuu. There's something terribly wrong with Cephiro. It's so lonely, the world of Cephiro is so alone, abandoned by its people. They have forgotten ... forgotten everything." Hikaru embraces Umi and starts to weep pitifully. "Forgotten?" Fuu said as she turned to look at Cephiro. "As long as I live I could never forget Cephiro, its people or what happened there. I don't understand how they could possibly forget any of that." "Is there something that we don't know Hikaru?" Umi asked her tearful companion. Hikaru composed herself and answered slowly. "It was so long ago." she answered. "So long ago? It was only four years ago Hikaru-chan" Umi replied. "That's the feeling I get from Cephiro itself." Hikaru answered "and I'm not sure exactly what it means. I also know that Cephiro is fantastically pleased to see me, to see us again" she finished.



"I think I might have an idea, an answer," Fuu remarked. "Remember, both times that we were summoned to Cephiro?" "Yes." answered Umi and Hikaru. "We accomplished our mission and returned back home to Tokyo. Both times it was in the evening of the same day we left." "Yes," Umi and Hikaru answered again. "Doesn't that seem strange? The time we spent in Cephiro on both missions seemed like much longer than just a single day." "It was several weeks" Hikaru answered "Yes, that's right Hikaru-chan, but what are you getting at Fuu?" Umi added. "Time moves slower here in Tokyo. Many weeks in Cephiro is but a single day here. Over the last four years, many centuries may have passed in Cephiro." Fuu finished.



Umi and Hikaru looked at each other, then at Fuu. "Then it is possible, like Hikaru-chan says - over time they have forgotten. Everything that happened with us, Princess Emeraude, Clef, Zagato, Debonair, Autozam, Fahren, Chizeta, all of it! In the end, everything we did was for nothing!" Umi finished angrily. "No, not nothing Umi-chan." Hikaru replied "I am still the Pillar of Cephiro, and as long as I still live, there is hope to save Cephiro from the neglect of it's own people ... and of me." Fuu and Umi both looked at Hikaru." "What do you mean Hikaru-chan?" Fuu asked. Hikaru waited a moment before answering, but replied "For the first year after we left Cephiro for the second time, I prayed very hard every day for the restoration of Cephiro. I took my new role as the Pillar very seriously and my efforts did pay off. Cephiro looked very beautiful when we last saw it three years ago. But after that day I thought that Cephiro would be all right on it's own, and the the people themselves were supposed to replace me as Pillar anyways I thought. So I stopped praying for Cephiro. I became too involved with my own life and didn't worry about Cephiro anymore." "That is how it was supposed work." Umi replied "The people of Cephiro were going to care for their world and no longer be dependant on the Pillar to sustain their world" she finished. But then Fuu added "Over a long period of time they seem to have forgotten their responsibilty. So it's not your fault Hikaru, you kept your promise to take the Pillar away, but they failed to work and keep their promise." "And now Cephiro is in danger of crumbling again" Hikaru added "that's why it wants us back."



"Wants us back?" Umi and Fuu both asked at the same time. "Yes" Hikaru answered "this time to save it from its own people." "Then I am with you Hikaru-chan. I'll go and do whatever it takes, just like before." Umi answered strongly."So will I, The Magic Knights will once again return to Cephiro." Fuu affirmed. "Yes." Hikaru added, then all three turned to the view of Cephiro and reached out with the strong desire of their hearts to the world that longed for their return.



Just like before, the floor of the Tokyo Tower observation deck vanished from beneath their feet. The three girls opened their eyes as soon as they began to fall. Hikaru looked down and saw the darkest blue of the sea thousands of feet below. "I forgot about this part" she thought to herself. Through the wind Fuu shouted "Where's the flying fish??" "I don't know!" Hikaru shouted back. "No one sent one this time!!" Umi shouted, "this mission will be very short if we don't do something quick!!" Umi looked down again at the quickly approaching surface of the sea. By now the wind currents had separated the three of them so that they could no longer hear each other. "Aha, I know!" Umi thought to herself. She closed her eyes and with the strength of her heart reached out to the mashin Ceres, and as loud as she could shouted his name - "Ceres!!" Immediately he awoke from deep slumber in his dimension and joined Umi in the sky above the sea. Ceres took Umi, and once safely inside of The mashin, Umi said to him, "Quickly, we must save Hikaru and Fuu! With a graceful dive Umi swooped down towards the sea and towards her two friends, still falling. What seemed like forever was only a moment before Umi was able to gently catch first Fuu, and then Hikaru with the great hands of Ceres.



Fuu and Hikaru looked around, stunned and surprised that they had suddenly been rescued from their perilous fall. When they saw that it was Umi holding them, they were both surpised again. Fuu spoke up "U-Umi-chan, you saved us .. by calling your mashin, Ceres." "Erm, gee, why didn't I think of that?" Hikaru mused drolly. "Eh-heh, how embarrassing" Fuu continued, "we could have just saved ourselves, eh-heh. But thanks Umi-chan." "Yes, thank you." Hikaru said too. "Just quick thinking that's all" Umi replied. "You should call your mashins as well and reawaken them. They will be glad to see you again, Hikaru-chan and Fuu-chan." "Right!" Hikaru and Fuu answered together. They both stood up, one in each of Umi's palms. Fuu closed her eyes and reached out with the strength of her heart until she felt the presence of Windom, sleeping in his dimension. Then in a loud voice she called his name: "Windom!!" Instantly the mashin awoke from his deep slumber and appeared in the sky next to Umi. Windom took Fuu into himself and once again Fuu was a Magic Knight. "Welcome back Fuu-sama." was all Windom said to her. Then Hikaru also closed her eyes and reached out with the strength of her heart until she felt the presence of Rayearth still sleeping. With a loud shout, Hikaru called his name: "Rayearth!!" And like the two others, the mashin immediately awakened and joined Umi and Fuu in the sky. Rayearth took Hikaru into himself and welcomed her back too.



And thus the legendary Magic Knights of Cephiro returned once again and were ready to rescue their world. "There, now we are ready!" Hikaru stated enthusiastically. "Ready to do what?" Umi asked. "Yes, we must have a plan of action Hikaru-chan." Fuu put forward. Hikaru looked at them sheepishly for a moment then answered "Yeah, you guys are right. Having all of the power of the Magic Knights won't help if we don't know what we have to do." Hikaru sighed. "We probably shouldn't stand around out here in the open like this, while we decide." Umi replied with concern. "We are likely to attract some unwanted attention." she finished. Then Fuu added "Cephiro has probably changed a great deal since we were here last. I think we should go to the large city we saw and find out what kind of world Cephiro is now. Find out what we are dealing with." Hikaru agreed "Yes, both of you are right. For now, let's just go to the shoreline near the city and set down." "M-hm" they both agreed.



The three of them flew across the sea to a deserted area of beach several miles north of the city. They set down there. Then the mashins set the three girls themselves down on the sand and were recalled into the jewels of their armor. Then their full dress armor transformed into their customary attire: their school fuku's with the light armor (as seen most often in the second season). They looked around momentarily, but then Umi walked down to the edge of the water. The waves were very calm and only gently lapping the wet sand of the seashore. But that's not what had Umi concerned. Hikaru and Fuu followed and joined her. "This is a beach of course, but I really hope no one actually comes and swims in this." Umi remarked as she pointed down at the brown and murky water. "Yeech, that's pretty disgusting looking stuff Umi-chan, it even smells bad." Hikaru commented. "How could the people of Cephiro let this happen to the sea?" Fuu asked. "Yet another question without an answer" Hikaru replied. "and Cephiro doesn't give up its secrets easily .. I know .. all too well." she finished quietly. Then Umi responded, "come on, let's get out of here. I can't bear to look at this any longer." Umi turned away from the sea almost in tears and walked back up the beach towards the woods.



The woods beyond the beach, wasn't really a natural place. It was free of undergrowth and easy to walk through. "This is very much like one of the city parks in Tokyo." Hikaru commented. "Indeed it is Hikaru-san, we need to look for some path or road that will lead us to the city" Fuu added. They walked quietly for a short distance and found just such a road, going through the woods. All three of them were surprised at what they had found."It's a paved road .. just like the ones back home." Hikaru said, astonished. "Cephiro's technology has advanced a great deal since we were here last" Fuu surmised. Umi had kept silent since they walked away from the beach, but now spoke up, "we should continue to follow it inland and find a way to the city." They all agreed and started to follow the paved road. Within a few minutes they came upon a gate across the road and a building like a guard shack was sitting at the roadside by the gate. It was deserted. They went around the gate and on the other side found a large sign welcoming visitors to the park. "Great Sandy Beach State Park" Fuu read the large sign. "Closed for the season." Hikaru read the placard hanging at the bottom. "It seems that I was right about it being a park." Hikaru finished. "Too bad the beach was in such bad shape, this might be a nice place to visit in the summer." Fuu remarked, but then she turned to Umi. "That's really bothering you isn't it Umi-san?" "Yes." Umi replied, then continued, "it's just like Hikaru said at the Tokyo Tower. The people of Cephiro have completely forsaken their world. They've neglected it and let it decay. Before long it will crumble again. And I think we all know that's what will happen, there isn't any doubt." They all looked at each other for a moment, then Hikaru went and embraced Umi. "You do understand don't you Umi-chan?" Hikaru said to her. "Don't let it bring sorrow to your heart Umi-chan, we stopped the crumbling once before, we can do it again." Hikaru reassured her.



Some ideas to come -



Journey to the city



The investigation



The mountain shrine and a connection to the past.



The Galactic Empire of Cephiro



Finding and rescue of Madoushi Clef



Revelation of the enemy and the conflict.

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[yuzuki chan17]

Hikaru-chan! That was extremly well written!

Yuzuki - *is jelious*

You have amazing writing ability =D I don't know if I will post mine now =P It would be kind of embarassing comparing the two ^^;;;;

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If I love, I'll be hurting as much as I love.

My thoughts have lost their life,

Even though everyone wishes for love, they keep on passing by each other

You are the same. It's painful, isn't it?

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[Shiidou Hikaru]

Thankies Yuzuki-chan! ^_^ It sounds like you really liked it, so I'm going to start working on it again. When I used to have more time, I used to write a lot. I love to write fiction and sometime my imagination works so fast that I can't write the ideas down fast enough. The concepts listed at the bottom would also be large sections at least as big as what's already been done. So in the end this could be a significant work. I wonder if I should e-mail it to CLAMP when I'm done?

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[yuzuki chan17]

hahaha, you should e-mail it to CLAMP! I can already see it.. Magic Knight Rayearth season 3! *smiles* That would be so great ^.^;

I'm glad you are going start working on it again! You have already caught my attention with it. I'm not allowing you to not continue it ^^; hehe

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If I love, I'll be hurting as much as I love.

My thoughts have lost their life,

Even though everyone wishes for love, they keep on passing by each other

You are the same. It's painful, isn't it?

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[Shiidou Hikaru]

After seeing the wonderful artwork you can do Yuzuki-chan, between the two of us, we could probably make our own manga. ^_^ Just for asking, how do you visualize the scenes in my story? I know it's a lot to ask, but could you sketch one? Someone else's perception of the story is probably different from how I visualize it. Some feedback would be really helpful.



Indeed, a new season of Rayearth would be awesome! Even if I never got any credit for it, just knowing that the inspiration came from yours truly, would be one of my greatest achievements. But, I'm really getting ahead of myself. ^_^;;

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[Shiidou Hikaru]

"You're right Hikaru." Umi replied. "I mustn't let sadness like this interfere with what we have to do" Umi finished, "We all feel it I think, right Hikaru-san?" Fuu added. "Yes. The sadness comes from Cephiro itself." Hikaru answered. "Then as long as we're here, our hearts will be troubled like this." Fuu said, then continued. "We'll have to be strong and remain focused, if we want to accomplish our mission." "Yes, Fuu-chan, otherwise we all risk falling into the same trap that I did, after what happened to Princess Emeraude." Hikaru finished. "Cephiro is a land of the will, and I really don't want to wind up fighting my own version of Nova." Umi responded. "Then we should get going. Cephiro needs us and we want to save it, so to the city!" Hikaru pronounced brightly. "M-hm" Umi and Fuu answered.



The three of them continued to follow the paved road for a short time. But then Hikaru, who is leading, stopped short. Umi and Fuu nearly bumped into her before holding up. "Erm, Hikaru??" Umi asked surprisedly. "Is something wrong Hikaru-san?" Fuu inquired. Hikaru answered: "There's something up there ahead of us. Look!" Hikaru pointed up into the tree branches overhead and in front of them. A small red object can be seen, some distance away. "What .. is it?" Fuu asked nervously. "Oh no! It's probably a monster!" Umi answered, a little frightened. "Yes, but I'm ready!" Hikaru assured them. Hikaru put her right hand over the jewel of her glove on her left hand. Then, with a flash of light, Hikaru draws her sword of Escudo out of the jewel and holds it with both hands in front of her. "Come on, let's go." Hikaru says to Umi and Fuu and starts to go on ahead towards the unknown danger. Umi and Fuu draw their swords as well. "Oh, here we go again!" Umi remarks drolly and takes off after Hikaru. Fuu just shrugs her shoulders and follows as well.



They charge down the road only a short distance and soon the forest opens up into a clearing. Hikaru slows down and stops. Umi and Fuu come up behind her quickly and stop in stunned amazement as well. Hikaru just stands there and blinks a couple of times. "Wha ...? Erm .. Hikaru ..!!" Umi starts off. "It's a traffic light Hikaru-san." Fuu finishes. "Erm, yeah it's a traffic light .. eh-heh" Hikaru replies very embarrased. "I guess I'm not going need this after all." Hikaru finishes as she stows her sword back into her glove jewel. Umi and Fuu stow their swords away as well. "Well at least it wasn't a monster." Umi added, quite relieved. "But what is a traffic light doing here in a place like this?" Umi continued. Fuu answered "There must be an intersection up there, where the light is." "Yes, so let's go and take a look." Hikaru responded.



Hikaru, Umi, and Fuu walk up to the intersection where the paved park road that they have been following meets a main highway. Another stunning surprise is found there by them. "Woah .. I can't beleive it" Hikaru responds, amazed. "They have cars Hikaru!" Umi reacts "And lots of them them too, holy cow!" she finishes. "It's just like back home. Are you sure that we're in Cephiro Hikaru-san?" Fuu adds in amazement. The highway that they are now standing beside is a large road, three lanes of traffic in each direction, with a grass median in the middle. The traffic is quite heavy and moving along at a decent rate of speed. Hikaru turns her back to the highway and faces Umi and Fuu. "I'm sure that this is Cephiro. I'm just as surprised as you guys to see all of these cars here." Hikaru answers Fuu's question. "This Cephiro is nothing like the one we knew at all." Umi commented. "It has become modern and technologically advanced, just like our home in Tokyo." Fuu remarked. "Judging by the large amount of traffic, I would say that Cephiro's population has grown a great deal since the last time we were here." she finished. Then Hikaru continued "Then what is happening? What place do we, the Magic Knights, have in a world like this?" "That's a really good question Hikaru" Umi observed. "On the other two missions we had here Clef and Mokona were there to show us what to do, but not this time." Umi finished. "Yes, Umi-san. Just figuring out what we must do will not be easy, but that must be a priority. We need to investigate and learn everything we can about this new Cephiro we're in now." Fuu stated firmly. "Oh dear." Hikaru mused. "Is something wrong Hikaru?" Umi asked. "You just mentioned Mokona, Umi-chan. I wonder what has become of him over all of this time. I hope that he is all right." Hikaru answered with concern. "Erm, yes. It will be different this time not having Mokona with us." Fuu responded. "Yeah. I guess I hadn't even thought about that." Umi added. "I'm going to miss having that little puff of marshmallow fluff hanging around with us." Umi sighs as she finishes. "Mokona is pretty powerful, I'm sure that he's been alright, Hikaru-san." Fuu reassured her. "You're probably right Fuu-chan." Hikaru responded.



While the three of them had been talking, a large vehicle had pulled up unnoticed behind Hikaru and opened one of it doors. Not seeming to have noticed it there, the vehicle's driver calls out to Hikaru, Umi, and Fuu: "Hey ladies! Are you going to get on the bus or not??" A surprised Hikaru quickly spins around. Umi and Fuu also look up at the driver. "Oh .. yes. I'm sorry." Hikaru answers him and gets on the bus. "Hikaru!" Umi reacts surprisedly, but Fuu calms her "This will be a good way to get to the city Umi-san." Then Fuu gets on the bus, and Umi follows reluctantly. Hikaru and Fuu go in and take a couple of seats together on one side of the bus. It is mostly empty. As Umi goes by the driver, he calls to her: "Hey, this isn't a free ride ya'know!" Umi grumbles under her breath but doesn't say anything out loud. She takes a samll change purse out of her pocket and grabs a number of Japanese yen coins. She drops them in the fare box and goes to a seat across the aisle from Hikaru and Fuu. As she walks away from the driver, Umi hears him mutter something like "Dang foreigners!"

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Edited by: Shiidou Hikaru at: 10/24/03 3:51 pm

[yuzuki chan17]

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Why must you be such a good writer!!? Ahh! I wish I could write something that was semi-close to this level! But... it is really, REALLY good Hikaru-chan! No.. not good, GREAT! AWESOME! Whenever I read it.. I can picture the series.. this is definitely the 3rd season! =) Thankies for posting it! *hugs*

[Shiidou Hikaru]

And many thankies for the feedback Yuzuki-chan! ^_^ I've had a little writing experience over the years, and it's something I love to do. There's always some kind of vision that I'm seeing when I write and I just put it on paper. It's really important to me that you can see the series when you read this, that tells me that I'm communicating what I see properly to you.



A few interesting things should happen on the bus ride. Right now is a period of discovery for Hikaru, Umi, and Fuu, they are learning about the new Cephiro. In this way I should be able to introduce my version of the world of Cephiro.

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[1004 sAkUrA]

Woah! An up-to-date Cephiro! Cool! The scenes are pretty good, Hikaru-chan! It makes me want to post mine, but...eheh...Me no done yet... ^^;;; (I have this habit of posting a chapter after I've finished the two that comes after that one...so if I wanted to post chapter 1, I'd have to be on chapter 3 before I post it...I don't know...some weird quirk in me. I guess I get paranoid and want it all perfect before I submit it. Heh heh. ^^;;; So far so good! Can't wait for more!



P.S. I'm writing my non-MKR fics on a pen name, Kristy Selean on fanfiction.net. I'm going to write my MKR fics under another pen name so...^^

[Shiidou Hikaru]

Ooooh, thankies Sakura-chan! ^_^ I'm happy that you like what I've done so far. It's a long way from being finished and I'm really sorry about that. v.v I would love to read anything that you have to post even if it's not finished. In a way it's better for fans that way because you can leave them hanging, waiting for the next installment. :P

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[1004 sAkUrA]

"In a way it's better for fans that way because you can leave them hanging, waiting for the next installment. :P "



Oooo...Evil...Was that Nova-chan just now?? Teehee. XD

[Shiidou Hikaru]

Sorry that i've been so slow with this. The "ideas to come" have been developed into a two page outline (so far) so with a clearer structure and a little free time, I should be able to start writing this again. ^_^

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[Haven]

Wow! I think this is really good! One suggestion; everytime there is a new speaker, indent.



Once you do that, this story will be perfect!



::coughs:: Once Clef comes in, that is... ^.^ I'm obsessed...





: Haven :



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::dies:: Sorry, I was really out of it yesterday, and I didn't realize that this was post way back when...are you going to continue it?

Edited by: Haven at: 6/10/05 7:37 pm

[Shiidou Hikaru]

Thankies Haven-san! ^_^ I have written a little more since then, but I'll have to post it again I think. Ezboard doesn't have much in the way of text formatting, it won't even do paragraph indents, but in any case my aim was to write it like a novel as opposed to a theatrical script or rpg.

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[Haven]

Cool!



Well, I meant like:



"Cool!" Said Hikaru, beaming



"Isn't it awesome?" said Umi.



Opposed to:



"Cool!"Said Hikaru, beaming. "Isn't it awesome?" said Umi.



^.^



: Haven :

[Shiidou Hikaru]

Today I uploaded this story to fanfiction.net and it wound up being three chapters. So if you would like to see the more current, updated version, take a lookie here - www.fanfiction.net/s/2477542/1/

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[Haven]

: ounces:: Yepyep, I saw it. Actually, I just clicked on it... ::waits for her slow computer to load::

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I'll try to find a picture when I get back from vacation, the computer here is really slow.



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Haven is an hyperactive fangirl (that needs more sleep and likes talking in third person...) that has an odd obsession with Clef's hands. Her favorite word is Erk. Erk!

[Yuki Fukurou]

Heh...already read it...as well as reviewed. I already posted the disclaimer along with the synopsis for mine. Having it also based on my RPG (which...seems to be...well...nearly deserted for the time being).



Other than that...pretty good.

You're supposed to destroy the Sith, not join it. - Obi-Wan Kenobi, SW: Ep. III

[Zagato]

Well, I did not wanted to say anything till I finish reading your Fic. It?s pretty good, I can?t see where you?re going, but still too good!



It?s hard to think about the time passing in Cephiro cause from first season to the second it was one year at Tokyo but a lot of time in Cephiro, but still, it was not THAT MUCH or else everyone would be death, it?s also suppoused that Ascot grew up because of magic for being more attractive to Umi, ok, perhaps it was a lot of time but not for the people of Cephiro who was the age they want, but not the same in Autosam. Lantis meet Eagle in autosam right before Zagato?s war (T_T) and Eagle still being a grow up person, even Zaz is still a child...



So one year in Tokyo should be like 5 or 10 max. at Cephiro, but perhaps not for the other planets, if we consider that the time moves different cause the gravity and also gravity is relative to the size of the planet then tha time would be different for every planet if... but then Chizeta?s people won?t have so much gravity so they should not be used to... but they are not humans so their body would be different... Whaaaaaaaaaaa... too complicated for me!



Weeeeeell... let?s go to the simple, I love the idea of Magic Knight driving cars, I mean, they will grow up some day, and we also can picture them driving "Mashins" but not cars! you?re exploring the human side of the girls, that?s too good! When are you going to continue?

[Shiidou Hikaru]

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Yes, this is a good thing and how I intended it to be. ^__^ The world of Cephiro has completely changed to the point where it isn't recognizable anymore and Hikaru, Umi, and Fuu must explore it all over again, just like they did the very first time they came to Cephiro. So I want the reader to also learn about the new Cephiro in the same manner and be in tune with the experiences of the characters.



One thing that may disappoint many MKR fans is that not many of the original Cephiran characters will return in my story because, as you mentioned, there has been a long passage of time. But I will clue everyone in and say that Mokona will be back. ^_^ I will however give historical details of them and the land of Cephiro and how things lead up to the present time. That will comprise the next big section of this and present a good idea of what the next mission of the Magic Knights will be. I also plan on introducing some new characters along the way, so hopefully people will like them too.



Recently I have been getting the urge to continue, so everyone please wish me the best. ^_^

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