| Itena |
Feb 9 2008, 02:23 AM
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Her footsteps were heard as slight taps onto the pavement. They were slow, methodical steps; you heard a rhythmic beat from the taps... They never speeded up, nor did they relent. Just the same tapping, a monotonous melody. They were beats to the silent music; the white noise of the city. They were unnoticeable, yet they were indeed a part of the artificial orchestra. Tap, tap, tap.
Were they to continue tapping forever more? Surely the girl would stop at some point. But then, the tapping would return once her feet started to move again. And then there were the sound of other people's footsteps; would that count as those taps? _______ This is what you get when there's a bored girl on the computer at 11:00 in the night; I should be getting to bed, but I just wanted to write something, even if that something is incredibly short and random. Who knows, maybe I'll continue with this tomorrow... -------------------- When Life gives you lemons, just burn them away! HIKARU SHIDOU, BEST ANIME CHARACTER THE WORLD WILL EVER SEE. EVER. ![]() |
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| Yuki Fukurou |
Feb 12 2008, 02:18 PM
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Not bad Itena. Sort of sounds like poetry, slightly, to me. I've written several poems myself back then.
-------------------- ![]() You are the ONE kagegaenai tomodachi de sore ijou no sonzai de mae o kuchi kara o, sou utta kureru kimi ga suki da yo kesshite kawaranu kimochi de uso no dai kono kokoro de tatta tsutaetai "Arigatou my ONE" - Lyrics to the 11th Pocket Monster film Giratina to Sora no Hanataba: Sheimi (Giratina and the Frozen Sky's Bouquet: Shaymin) ONE by Crystal Kay |
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