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Yuki Fukurou
post Jun 9 2005, 09:46 AM
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Heh...it seems my small poetry thread here was deleted during the attack. Oh well.



Anyway...(considering that I'm sometimes obssessed w/the subj. of death)...I've decided to write another poem. (This...by far has got to be the best one I've written on the subject).



Death & Dying:



Death?such a scary fate & reality

And a hard way to accept.



We wish for our loved ones to be with us forever

But we know that cannot be.



We sometimes think life is unfair,

Yet it?s a lesson we have to learn.



It comes unexpectedly; we hardly notice it?s there,

Some people think it?s nothing, they really don?t care.



Yet once it happens, we can?t stop it,

The realization, the shock, the news?is just too much to bear.



We?re filled with a sense of emptiness & grief,

Like a stab through the heart, like our lives are incomplete.



Yet through the grief & despair comes a ray of hope

A hope to see them again, someday.



Death is like parting, but it won?t be forever

So don?t feel down & keep grieving.



Instead, remember them for all the good they?ve done,

How they impacted your lives.



Memories are your partner now; they?ll never die,

And even though they?re not with us physically, but in spirit?



There?s always a special place for them in our hearts.

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Yuki Fukurou
post Jun 30 2005, 10:47 AM
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Anyway...here's another one I've made:



Falling Leaves:



There goes another leaf falling from the branches of an old tree

Changing color throughout the seasons, falling to the ground

It covers it all around

It shrivels up as it gets to fall,

And renews itself in the spring

It clings to the branch whenever the winds blow strong

And sometimes floats in the air or stumbles when being carried by the wind



And as soon as the wind stops, it falls everywhere

But sometimes it's dehydrated when there's noth enough water to help replenish it.

There goes another leaf, from the branches of antoehr tree, changing & falling.





"Do not be sad & do not weep, for not all tears...are from evil" - Gandalf, LOTR: Return of the King. (It's one of my favorite quotes from the movie)


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Yuki Fukurou   Poetry (Ver.2)   Jun 9 2005, 09:46 AM
yuzuki chan17   Re: Poetry (Ver.2)   Jun 9 2005, 06:47 PM
Yuki Fukurou   Re: Poetry (Ver.2)   Jun 30 2005, 10:47 AM
Shiidou Hikaru   Re: Poetry (Ver.2)   Jul 2 2005, 08:14 PM
Yuki Fukurou   Re: Poetry (Ver.2)   Jul 3 2005, 10:11 PM
Presea   Kewl poems, Yuki-san. :D Speaking of leaves (Falli...   Aug 3 2006, 09:49 PM
Kyouka-chan   Presea, that's wonderful. Do you know the mete...   Aug 3 2006, 11:16 PM
Yuki Fukurou   Hey guys. Haven't posted in this one for a wh...   Aug 3 2006, 11:28 PM
Shiidou Hikaru   Wow, it had been more than a year since anyone had...   Aug 4 2006, 12:04 PM
Presea   Thanx, you guys. :) I had always wanted to use the...   Aug 12 2006, 12:29 AM
Kyouka-chan   Ah, there we go, I found the ripped out pages of m...   Aug 12 2006, 01:00 PM
Presea   Here's another one I just made the day before ...   Aug 13 2006, 07:32 PM
Yuki Fukurou   Very nice, Presea. Your rhyming technique is very...   Aug 13 2006, 11:13 PM
Yuki Fukurou   Here's another that I've written yesterday...   Aug 15 2006, 11:40 PM
Presea   It's cooies, Yuki-san. :D You know what I...   Aug 20 2006, 08:42 PM
Kyouka-chan   I would actually think "reigns" and ...   Aug 28 2006, 11:46 PM
Presea   Yeah, I s'spose that's a more accurate des...   Sep 4 2006, 07:52 PM
Shirotatsu   Yeah, I write little things here and there. I norm...   Sep 4 2006, 10:32 PM
Presea   Coolies. B) I like your new username. It seems to....   Sep 6 2006, 09:51 PM
Shirotatsu   Oh, thanks. ^^ It's my old username, that I ki...   Sep 6 2006, 11:38 PM
Presea   smart! B)   Sep 20 2006, 08:58 PM
Yuki Fukurou   *sighs*. I haven't been here in a long time. ...   Jan 27 2007, 10:26 PM
Shirotatsu   This...is a very imaginative piece that I explaine...   Jan 28 2007, 01:01 AM
Docs Fox   The sky is brown. The sky is the ground. To the sk...   Jan 28 2007, 03:24 AM
Yuki Fukurou   Hi guys. Just came up with another poem. This ti...   Feb 1 2007, 11:48 PM
Yuki Fukurou   Hey guys. Here's another one I've made. ...   Feb 11 2007, 10:18 PM
Shirotatsu   A poem written for a noble cause. I'll give it...   Feb 12 2007, 12:38 AM
Yuki Fukurou   Here's another ode that I've made. This t...   Feb 25 2007, 10:05 PM
Shirotatsu   I learned about a style of poetry today in class c...   Mar 1 2007, 11:39 PM
Yuki Fukurou   I checked on the explanation of this type of poetr...   Mar 2 2007, 12:06 AM
Shirotatsu   Now, the task is mine to write one. ^^ ...I have ...   Mar 2 2007, 12:08 AM
Yuki Fukurou   Anyway...just came up with another poem a few minu...   Mar 2 2007, 12:24 AM
Shirotatsu   Lots of rhetorical questions there... So here...   Mar 2 2007, 12:52 AM
Yuki Fukurou   Here's another war poem that I wrote: Middle ...   Mar 3 2007, 12:29 AM
Yuki Fukurou   Hi guys. Here's another poem I wrote: Sakura...   Mar 12 2007, 10:46 PM
Yuki Fukurou   Here's another that I made a couple of days ag...   Mar 14 2007, 07:09 PM
Yuki Fukurou   Shiro-kun...I know you told me before to not doubl...   Mar 14 2007, 11:42 PM
Shirotatsu   (By the way, double posting doesn't matter any...   Mar 15 2007, 09:23 PM
Yuki Fukurou   I suppose I could try and revise it...but...not su...   Mar 31 2007, 10:26 PM
Kagura-chan   I wouldn't have ever guess it would be you tha...   Feb 27 2008, 11:32 AM
Yuki Fukurou   This is a good poem you found Kagura-chan. Do you...   Feb 27 2008, 06:04 PM
Yuki Fukurou   This is just one of the latest poems that I manage...   Jul 11 2008, 11:25 PM
Docs Fox   Snowflakes are frozen memories. Did you know? ...   Aug 9 2008, 08:37 AM
Itena   Eh, why not? This is a poem I had created in the b...   Aug 12 2008, 02:35 AM
Yuki Fukurou   Hmm...very interesting, Itena-chan. Anyway...I ju...   Nov 13 2008, 11:13 PM
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Haine-chan   It's very pretty and delightfully bittersweet...   Jul 26 2009, 03:37 PM
Shiidou Hikaru   Oh yes, you're very welcome to call me Shii-ch...   Aug 1 2009, 12:01 PM
Yuki Fukurou   Last Minute: As I lay bedridden with wires attach...   Aug 26 2009, 12:49 AM


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