 A poem without a name... |
| Docs Fox |
 Aug 21 2005, 03:34 AM
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Lachrymose...knocked
Off balance Viced...an unpleasant EMbracE in such a vibe i abide EDIT: slight change...and still no name.  Edited by: Docs Fox  at: 8/22/05 2:03 am |
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| Yuki Fukurou |
Aug 21 2005, 06:08 PM
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Interesting. Sounds also like a riddle as well. Have you thought of a name for it yet?
 "The next time we meet on the battlefield, I will show you NO mercy!" - Athrun Zala, Gundam SEED |
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| yuzuki chan17 |
Aug 21 2005, 08:50 PM
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 Yuugai no Tenshi Group: Super Moderator Posts: 8,066 Joined: 8-October 03 From: Ontario, Canada Member No.: 4 |
*sigh*
Very subtle and exquisite...  |
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| Shiidou Hikaru |
Aug 22 2005, 10:19 AM
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It's rather unusual Docs-san and I'm not really sure what to think. The grammer is hideous, but what it expresses is brilliant. Sort of like Picasso with text ... if that makes any sense ...
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