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Diamond
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« on: January 04, 2005, 12:11:59 PM »

I found this while looking for quizilla quizes to do, and this came up instead of a quiz on one link. Somone wanted to shre it with everyone and I can see why.


(Story is called Daddy, I don't know who wrote it)


Her hair was up in a pony tail, her favorite dress tied with a bow. Today was "Daddy's Day" at school, and she couldn't wait to go. But her mommy tried to tell her, that she probably should stay home. Why the kids might not understand, if she went to school alone. But she was not afraid; she knew just what to say. What to tell her classmates of why he wasn't there today. But still her mother worried, for her to face this day alone. And that was why once again, she tried to keep her daughter home. But the little girl went to school eager to tell them all. Of a dad whos never there a dad who never calls. There were daddies along the wall in back, for everyone to meet. Children squirming impatiently, anxious in their seats. one by one the teacher called a student from the class. To introduce their daddy, as seconds slowly passed. At last the teacher called her name, every child turned to stare. each of them was searching, for a man who wasn't there. "Where's her daddy at?!" she heard a boy call out. "She probably doesn't have one," another student dared to shout. And from somewhere near the back, She heard another father say, "Looks like another deadbeat dad, too busy to waste his day." The words did not offend her, as she smiled up at her Mom. and looked back at her teacher, who told her to go on. And with hands behind her back, Slowly she began to speak And out from the mouth of a child, came words incredibly unique. "My Daddy couldn't be here, because he lives so far away. But I know he wishes he could be, Since this is such a special day And though you cannot meet him, I wanted you to know. All about my daddy and how much he loves me so. He loved to tell me stories he taught me to ride my bike. He surprised me with pink roses, and taught me to fly a kite. We used to share fudge sundaes, and ice cream in a cone. And though you cannot see him. I'm not standing here alone. "Cause my daddy's always with me, even though we are apart I know because he told me, he'll forever be in my heart" With that, her little hand reached up, and lay across her chest. Feeling her own heartbeat, beneath her favorite dress. And from somewhere in the crowd of dads, her mother stood in tears. Proudly watching her daughter, who was wise beyond her years. And when she dropped her hand back down, staring straight into the crowd. She finished with a voice so soft, but its message clear and loud. "I love my daddy very much, he's my shining star. And if he could, he'd be here, but heaven's just too far You see he was a fireman and died just this past year When airplanes hit the towers and taught Americans to fear. But sometimes when I close my eyes, it's like he never went away." And then she closed her eyes, and saw him there that day. And to her mother's amazement, she witnessed with surprise. A room full of daddies and children, all starting to close their eyes. Who knows what they saw before them, Who knows what they felt inside Perhaps for merely a second, they saw him at her side. "I know you're with me Daddy," to the silence she called out. And what happened next made believers, of those once filled with doubt. Not one in that room could explain it, for each of their eyes had been closed.. But there on the desk beside her, was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.
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« Reply #1 on: January 05, 2005, 04:36:56 AM »

Wow. That is an amazing story, Diamond!
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« Reply #2 on: January 05, 2005, 12:13:35 PM »

A very wonderful, poetically written story. It was great to read, thankies for posting it Diamond-chan. ^__^
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« Reply #3 on: January 23, 2005, 01:59:16 PM »

I love this story. I believe it was once a chain email too with a few differences.

My aunt read this at my uncle's funeral, when he died he left his wife with 5 children, and I cried so hard. It was just too much. Because I could see Crystal, who was 5 when he died, standing up in front of her class saying this.

Thank you so much for posting this Diamond-chan~! Knowing that he is still with me helps a lot.
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« Reply #4 on: January 23, 2005, 02:08:09 PM »

*huggles Fushi-chan* Sorry about your uncle...I'm glad I could help even without knowing I was helping. ^_^
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« Reply #5 on: February 06, 2005, 11:17:34 AM »

*huggles* You help me without knowing every time you post! *huggles more*
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« Reply #6 on: February 21, 2005, 12:08:08 PM »

that is so sad yet so powerful.
i dont think a peice of prose has affected me emotionally so much before.
I love the poetic theme and its just lovely and sweet and i wanna give that girl a hug v_v
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